2016北京高考英语作文范文

2016北京高考英语作文范文 Yours faithfully, LiHua 这是一篇满分作文。由于这篇作文的出现，导致了安徽省该年的英语作文分数普遍偏低。仔细分析了这篇文章，写的的确是好， 很地道的美式英语，一些词语的大胆使用，让人不得不猜测此人 或者是家人可能有过国外生活的经历，否则这么地道标准的英语， 可不是一朝一夕所能写出来的。比如说：my cup tea,apart from oralEnglish, last least,celebrities, catchy 和trendy 的大胆 运用，list, cant wait 非谓语动词为作文添彩 北京卷高考英语试题回放情景作文 假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华，“绿色行动”专栏写一篇以“Green Action OurClass” 注意：词数不少于60 提示词： 郊区April 12 memorablebecause our class had trees,we all had ourduty beautifyour environment. 与环保结合，立意较好。文章思路清晰，要点连贯，分词短语作状语等较好的句式表达。 weChinese hold chopsticks. He tryingso hard pickup firstglance, bitfunny, weChinese take eatingnoodles. copyus. Obviously he hardway. Maybe using one fork betterjob, myopinion, we don’t need copyothers’ ways thinking.Sometimes simplerway doingthings may betterway. 本文是开放性作文，要求考生把握好图画内容，发散表达。考生重点要看出这个人是卷发高鼻的外国人，要体会到西式刀叉对 中式食物的矛盾性。行文结构十分明晰，同时句式使用得熟练而 准确。 全国卷高考英语试题回放 假定你是李华，从小喜爱大熊猫panda,一直通过有关网站 website关注三年前在美国圣迭哥动物园出生的大熊猫“苏琳” 和她的母亲“白云”。现在苏琳即将三岁。请根据以下要点给动物 园工作人员写一封信： 自我介绍;2、祝贺苏琳生日;3、 感谢工作人员;4、 索取苏 琳三岁生日照。 注意：1、词数100左右;2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;3、 开头语已为你写好。例文： DearSir/Madam, Greetingsfrom China! yearsago Baiyungave birth herdaughter watching hbirthday expressmy thanks yourhard work, herparents healthylife Yourstruly, LiHua 达到位。文章行文活泼，感情真挚，长短句运用合理，结合了简单句和复合句 好词2.express v.表达 3.give birth 好句I’dlike happybirthday expressmy thanks yourhard 正是你们的努力工作让苏 2.房间及价格：单人间共20间，100 元/天;双人间共15 150元/天;热水淋浴;3.餐饮：餐厅中、西餐，咖啡厅茶、咖啡;4. 游泳池：全天免费开放; 5.欢迎预定。注意：1.词数100 左右，开 头语已为你写好;2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Welcome BaishanMountain Hotel! BaishanMountain Hotel nowopen 500meters far from BaishanMountain, providessingleperson room, RMB100yuan per day 15double person rooms, RMB150 yuan per day. alsoprovides ho waterbath service. You can enjoy both Chinese westernfood drinkcoffee swimmingpool wholeday. All servicescan bring great convenience veryenjoyable. So come enjoyyourself! bookrooms BaishanMountain. 本文开门见山，首先点明了主旨。本文最大的特点是应用了很多比较复杂的句式，使文章比较出彩。开头使用了独立结构交代 宾馆位置。which 引导的非限制性定语从句的使用也很正确。总地 来说，文章句式精炼，是篇不错的满分作文。 providev.提供2. convenience n.便利 servicescan bring great convenience veryenjoyable.所有这些服务都会给你带来便利，并且非常的愉 评析：bringgreat convenience，带来便利。 重庆卷高考英语试题回放 据报道，7岁的美国女孩Amy Bruce 后处于极度的痛苦之中，美 国抗癌协会ACS决定，每当 Amy3 美分的治疗款。假如你是新华 中学的学生李华，请你用英文给自我介绍 词数1004.Dear Amy, yougot lungcancer you great pain. youshould realize future.So, stand up fightagainst sureyou getenough money cured.Hope you can wellsoon. LiHua reportedthat...等，都比较好。作 者对定语从句的使用恰到好处地修饰了文章，行文自然而通顺， 值得学习。 好词1.realizev.意识到2.promise v.允诺3.donate v.捐赠 好处：which引导限制性定语从句。 So,stand up fightagainst 江苏卷高考英语试题回放 月29日上午10 点到11 点，全国亿万学生阳光体育活 动在各地大中小学校同时进行，江苏省1，100 万学生积极参与了 这项活动。 请你根据以上提示，用英语准备一份发言稿，注意： 参考词汇：阳光体育活动——教育部——the Ministry Goodafternoon, everyone, nationalstudent sports improvingstudents health, 00a.m.~11:00a.m.onApril 29， 2007 manyprimary middleschools Almost 11 million students Jiangsuprovince participated thoughour Health basiccondition ourstudy. wedid donow! 本文分为三段，前两段叙述，后一段发表观点，典型的作文结构。在句式使用上，作者用法多样，使用了独立结构和虚拟语气， 十分出彩。复杂的句式是本文的特点之一。 好词1.wagev.发动2.aim v.瞄准3. advocate v.提倡 Educationadvocates wedo exercises onehour canwork healthily 50years. wedid doexercises, we wouldn’t getgood study records. 2016北京高考英语作文范文篇二：2016 月北京各区高三期末英语作文集锦 第一节（15 假设你是红星中学高三（1）班的班长李华,你们班的外教 Lisa 已经结束本学期的教学工作回到美国，请代表你们班给她写一封 邮件。邮件的内容包括： 注意：1.词数不少于50； DearLisa, LiHua DearLisa, Howhave you been? You must enjoyingyour life back home.We still miss dayswe spent together. lastterm, we all benefited lotfrom your lessons. We improved our oral English becamemore confident expressourselves. addition,we learned so much about western culture myclass, wouldlike thankyou teachingus English! We wish you joy newstage LiHua 第二节（20 Anti JapaneseWar”为题，给 校刊“英语角”写一篇英文稿件，介绍你们班同学参观抗日战争 纪念馆的过程。 1．到达；2．参观； 3．听故事； 4．合影。 Onepossible version: LastSaturday, our class visited Anti Japanese War. When our school bus arrived Museum,we got off momentwe went exhibitionroom, we were attracted descriptionsabout wall.Some students took notes while others had littlediscussion. We were shocked wegathered anotherroom oldsoldier telling storiesabout war.Therefore, we had betterunderstanding Beforewe left, we all came oldsoldier ourvisit. We were very glad truehero. Wehope museummore people can remember what happened peacefullife. 第四部分：书面表达共两节，35 作为交换项目的一部分，学校将于本周五下午两点组织美国交换生到红星小学进行志愿者活动。假设你是校学生会主席，请向 他们口头通知此事，内容包括： haveyour attention, please? all.Thank you. Onepossible version: haveyour attention, please? Fridayyou visitHong Xing Primary School volunteers,which veryimportant part exchangeprogram. schoolbus pickyou up schoolgate tripaims Americanculture. You may prepare some mini lectures kidssome simple beautifulsongs. Throughsharing your culture them,you knowmore about return.We wish you all goodtrip! all.Thank you. 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，介绍你和家人在去年 UnforgettableDay”为题，给校刊“英语角”写一篇英文 提示词：阳台balcony 朋友圈WeChat Moments UnforgettableDay militaryparade 70thanniversary WorldWar II. Onepossible version: UnforgettableDay militaryparade 70thanniversary WorldWar II. Ten minutes before bigevent, we seated ourselves TV,eager livebroadcast. paradestarted. Seeing militaryequipment proceed along Chang’an Street, past Tian’anmen Square, we couldn’t help cheering ourpowerful country. militaryaircraft overhead caught our attention. We rushed tookphotos planesflying formation.What impressivescene! couldn’twait sharemy pictures WeChatMoments. mysurprise, WeChat alreadyflooded numerouspictures commentsexpressing love ourmotherland. What unforgettableday! 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，请给你的外教Mr.Black 封信，邀请他参加你们年级举行的英语读书会（readingcircle）活 动，邮件的内容包括： 注意：1.词数不少于50； DearMr. Black, LiHua DearMr. Black, inviteyou takepart readingcircle librarynext Monday from 3:30 5:00p.m .We readsome popular English stories. Could you come giveus some guidance? lookingforward yourcoming. LiHua 加入你是红星中学高三学生李华。上周，你作为志愿者参与了学校接待澳大利亚中学生访问团的活动。请根据以下四幅图的先 后顺序，给校刊“英语角”写一篇英文稿件，介绍来访学生体验 中国书法的过程。 2016北京高考英语作文范文篇三：2016 京城六区高考英语一模 作文 范文集锦 第一节（15 假设你是红星中学高三（1）班的班长李华,你们班的外教 Lisa 已经结束本学期的教学工作回到美国，请代表你们班给她写一封 邮件。邮件的内容包括： 询问她的近况；2.回顾在外教课上的收获；3. 表达对她的感 谢和祝福。 注意：1.词数不少于 50；2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词 DearLisa, LiHua Onepossible version DearLisa, Howhave you been? You must enjoyingyour life back home.We still miss dayswe spent together. lastterm, we all benefited lotfrom your lessons. We improved our oral English becamemore confident expressourselves. addition,we learned so much about western culture myclass, wouldlike thankyou teachingus English! We wish you joy newstage LiHua 第二节（20 Anti JapaneseWar”为题，给 校刊“英语角”写一篇英文稿件，介绍你们班同学参观抗日战争 纪念馆的过程。 1．到达；2．参观； 3．听故事； 4．合影。 Onepossible version LastSaturday, our class visited Anti Japanese War. When our school bus arrived Museum,we got off momentwe went exhibitionroom, we were attracted descriptionsabout wall.Some students took notes while others had littlediscussion. We were shocked wegathered anotherroom oldsoldier telling storiesabout war.Therefore, we had betterunderstanding Beforewe left, we all came oldsoldier ourvisit. We were very glad truehero. We hope museummore people can remember what happened peacefullife. 第四部分：书面表达共两节，35 作为交换项目的一部分，学校将于本周五下午两点组织美国交换生到红星小学进行志愿者活动。假设你是校学生会主席，请向 他们口头通知此事，内容包括： 活动意义。注意： 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 haveyour attention, please? all.Thank you. Onepossible version: haveyour attention, please? Fridayyou visitHong Xing Primary School volunteers,which veryimportant part exchangeprogram. schoolbus pickyou up schoolgate tripaims Americanculture. You may prepare some mini lectures kidssome simple beautifulsongs. Throughsharing your culture them,you knowmore about return.We wish you all goodtrip! all.Thank you. 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，介绍你和家人在去年 UnforgettableDay”为题，给校刊“英语角”写一篇英文 词数不少于60；2.短文的开头已给出，不计入总词 提示词：阳台balcony 朋友圈 WeChatMoments UnforgettableDay militaryparade 70thanniversary WorldWar II. 1．等待观看2．观看阅兵 3．阳台拍照 4．分享感受 Onepossible version: UnforgettableDay militaryparade 70thanniversary WorldWar II. Ten minutes before bigevent, we seated ourselves TV,eager livebroadcast. paradestarted. Seeing militaryequipment proceed along Chang’an Street, past Tian’anmen Square, we couldn’t help cheering ourpowerful country. militaryaircraft overhead caught our attention. We rushed tookphotos planesflying formation.What impressivescene! couldn’twait sharemy pictures WeChatMoments. mysurprise, WeChat alreadyflooded numerouspictures commentsexpressing love ourmotherland. What unforgettableday! 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，请给你的外教Mr.Black 封信，邀请他参加你们年级举行的英语读书会（readingcircle）活 动，邮件的内容包括： 注意：1.词数不少于 50；2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词 DearMr. Black, LiHua Onepossible version: DearMr. Black, inviteyou takepart readingcircle librarynext Monday from 3:30 5:00p.m .We readsome popular English stories. Could you come giveus some guidance?