职高英语作文

篇一：职高会考英语作文 Environment怎样保护环境 havebeen happened so many strong earthquakes recently world,especially Japan，goodenvironment can make people feel happy environmentmeans improving our life., we mustn’t cut down trees. Instead, we should plant more trees flowersaround us. Meanwhile, we should stop factories from pouring waste water givingoff waste gas air.Whenever we see litter ground,we should pick dustbins.Never spit public.Don’t draw publicwalls. everyone’sduty Low carbonlife 低碳生活 Low carbonlife alwayswalk schoolinstead car.Besides, usethings neverforget turnoff lightswhen myduty low carbonlife. simplestactivities can make realdifference environment.So sugguestwe should reuse books we’dbetter spendmuch money expensiveclothes. everyonedoes something betterplace. Unit5BShould Internet Slang Forbidden?网络语言应该受 到禁止吗？ NowadaysInternet Slang, “GG,MM, Lei Ren” has become popular among differentopinions InternetSlang. Some students think Internet Slang 生动的,fashionable intelligence.Besides, makeschatting Internetquicker However,some other students think Internet Slang lacks depth toosimple. Also mostpeople. wordssometimes might make people confused, even resulting Everycoin has two sides. myopinion, living InformationAge, wedon’t know InternetSlang, we seem 期中一卷写信：写给编辑的信 主题“烦恼向谁说” DearEditor, student.Recently we have made survey “Towhon do you go when trouble?”Here Moststudents friendswhen havetrouble because cantalk understandeach other easily. Some parentsabout haverich experience helpful.Only fewsolve can’tget otherpeople, either. havefew friends. thinkwe’d better ask our teachers, parents, classmates helpwhen we YoursSincerely WangPing Unit6B MyFavorite Sport 我最喜欢的运动 Amonglots sports,basketball myfavorite. firsttime reallyenjoy feelingwhen ballright bringsme much confidence basketballplay myreal life. whenyou play basketball you can learn lotfrom ballgets up downjust like how everytime getdown bouncesback. knowfrom whenyou lifewe should just get up Alsowe realize teamwork from basketball. Unit7BProtecting Environment保护环境 Nowadaysmore morepeople pay attention moreserious.. We can see plastic bag cokecans here myopinion, we should start from ourselves. We need goodhabit makepeople around us know protectingenvironment. Unit9BHealth veryimportant veryimportant reallyworried about your health. You should someonce weeklike play badminton swimming.Moreover, healthdiet ou should stayup late goodrest. 期末一话题： 因感冒不能上学，写请假条给老师 DearMr. Green, tellyou didn’tfeel well daysbecause badcold. doctortold me goodrest, therefore can’tgo twodays’ leave. getwell, time.Do hope youcould allow my absence. Thankyou very much. Yourssincerely LiMing 期末二话题：你的朋友美国朋友MARY 写信说要来杭州度假， DearMary, receivedyour letter yesterday. veryglad you’ll come HangZhou. justgoing two weekholiday after exam.We can spend our holiday together. We can go boating hopeyou’ll like them. sametime, we may learn languages from each other. way,please call me letme know about your flight number youget ticket,I’ll meet you surewe’ll have goodtime together. Bestwishes yourfamily. FanYa 期末三话题：假如你是李明，给报社写封“如何克服学习压力和紧张情绪”的英文短信。 Deareditor, learninghas become bigproblem onlystudents alsoteachers. Learning should happything. Here supplysome pieces advicefrom my own experiences First,read jokes musicwhen you wllhelp you keepcalm Second,do sports. helpyou breathefresh air relaxyourself. last,make friends others,when you feel sad difficulties,you can talk them.Those were all my opinions towards Yourssincerely LiMing 期末试卷四：话题：拯救地球Saving Ourearth verybeautiful covered freshair. We lived happylife withoutpollution. economy,many factories have been set up, pouring poisonous gases lakesevery day. Many fish Wehave only one earth, we should do something students,we should useplastic bags when shopping. We should littereverywhere. We should save water usetwo sides 期末试卷五话题：Shopping Nowadaysmore morepeople go shopping online instead stores,Most peoples think veryconvenient. gofrom one shop choosewhat shoponline opens hourseveryday. Consumers choosealmost everything lowerprice, themquickly. thinkshopping Internethas its disadvantages. firstone wecan reallysee cannotcheck quality,so we may buy something useless, alsothink shoppingonline makeus lose ourfriends. 摘要以前英语作文评分依据是根据要点和语言准确度而定， 但近几年要求“使用较多语法结构和词汇”，因此要想得高分，除 了要点和语言准确度以外，还必须在较复杂的句子结构或较高级 的词汇上有所表现。句式单一，缺乏生气的文章，哪怕无任何错 误也不可能得高分，相反“有些错误，但是为了使用较复杂结构 或较高级词汇所致”，给分档次仍在最高档21～25 关键词复杂句子 高级词汇 卷面 每次给学生评讲作文，笔者总把学生的作文比作前去求职的“面试者”，而改卷老师就是那前去招聘的“考官”， “考官”面对成 千上万面试者，不一会就因枯燥而疲惫不堪，如何让你这个面试 者给考官留下好的印象而打高分呢？那只有你这个面试者必须要 有出众之处，让“考官”眼前一亮，自然你的分数就会让你也眼 前一亮。如何让你这个面试者有出众之处呢？ 职高的学生，整体的作文都不好，如果你的作文错误较少，就会显得非常好了，如果你再能用几个复杂的句子，高级的词汇， 那你就会很出众了。笔者把它具体归纳如下： girl,I’m18 years old likedancing graduatefrom Fangxian Vocational technical school 修正I,an18 year old girl ,who am fond fromFangxian Vocational technical school 2、2 3个复杂句子，3 4 个高级词汇的正文。 运用主从复合句：定语从句、宾语从句、主语从句、同位语从句。 〔原文〕I do like joining EnglishCorner.It builtthree years ago. dolike joining EnglishCorner which builtthree years onlylearn English alsolearn mypart time. 〔修正〕Not only do learnEnglish mypart time. 〔原文〕Wefelt very very happy when we were together. 修正〕We did feel very happy when we were together 〔原文〕We often practise speaking English,change our ideas,talk about our favouriate sports 〔修正〕Weoften practise speaking English,changing our ideas,talking about our favouriate sports 〔原文〕Ourschool held EnglishCorner three years ago. EnglishCorner beingheld ourschool three years ago. 运用由with 或without 引导的短语。 原文〕Wecan learn spoken English.And we can talk about interesting things.We also talk about learning English experience Wecan learn spoken English, talking about interesting things, English learning experience 然后，besides 还有， moreover 此外， furthermore 而且等。 转折: however 然而， country相反， after all 毕竟等。 总结: finally 最后， last最后， conclusion最后，in brief 总之等。 强调: indeed 确实， certainly 一定， surely 确定， above all 尤其 likeEnglish Corner very much. amkeen EnglishCorner very much. 原文〕Anumber studentsall join activitiesactively studenttakes activepart 〔原文〕Wepractice spoken English,talk about something interesting,we often talk about our experience,too. 修正〕Wepractice spoken English,talking about something interesting,sharing our experience,too. 介绍你们学校的情况：这是一所中等职业学校，有40 多年的历 史，许多毕业生都已成名。全校有 39 个班，1600 多学生，教职 员工（faculty）近 200 人。校园很大而且美丽，四周绿树环绕。 有一座图书大楼，两座教学楼，一个大操场。老师对学生要求很 严格，学生很尊敬老师。 Ourschool （原文）Ourschool mediumvocational school.It has more than forty years history.Manygraduates come from our school veryfamous now. （修改）Ourschool secondryvocational school morethan 40 year history.Many graduates who come from our school veryfamous present.（原文）There 39classes ourschool.The number twohundred teachers ourschool 39classes ourschool.the number 1600,andnearly 200 faculties workinghard ourschool. （原文）Ourschool verybig manytrees around our school .Our school has verybig library.we often read books it.Twoteaching buildings bigplayground ourschool. （修改）Ourcampus fairlybig beautiful,aroundwhich manytrees,in which largeplayground,a huge library where we often read books twoteaching buildings. （原文）Theteachers ourschool verykind.The students askedvery strictly studentsadmire teachersvery very much.110 （修改）Theteachers ourschool verykind,but requiredvery strictly ourteachers,and studentsdo honor teachersvery much .共107 我们不能为了长句子而刻意书写与全文衔接不紧的长句子，而应是在书写完全文后，修改 2 3 个与全文连接顺畅的长句子，替 换3 4 个高级词汇。牢记基本要求！！！ 作文是对知识的综合应用,笔者结合这几年的教学经验,谈谈职高英语作文在教学中的一些浅见。 职高生基础差,对学习缺少信心,英语作文无从下笔,大片空白,只能写出单个词,难以成句。高职考的作文比分重,难度大,因此学 生必须提高英语写作水平。 高职考的作文评分标准,有一条是以关键词给分,所以应要求学生在写作时关键词必须用上,如这样一篇作文: 根据所给情景,参考所给的提示及关键词,写一篇60～80 假如你是李平,你的朋友John 向你询问如何保持健康,请你给他 :give,someadvice,beans,especially,freshvegetables ,You’d better, take physical exercise, stay up 根据关键词造句:我可以给你提一些建议,要合理饮食,多吃写豆类食物,尤其是新鲜蔬菜和水果。你最好注意锻炼身体,不要熬 简尔言之,就是首先依据提供的词语,在头脑中有一个大致的轮廓,能知其意,再以词为中心,遣词造句。 2写句子。所谓写句子,是指在作文入门期间,要求学生严格做到“主谓宾表