高考英语满分作文范文及满分评分讲解.doc

知住房面积为 25 平方米，月租 500 元。注意：1．词数：100 左右：2．参考词汇：房租—Tentn..I’m very happy to receive your letter, and I’m glad to hear that you will go to China to learnChinese here. I have already found a fiat for you. It is on Fangcao Street, which is not far fromJianxin Chinese School. Bus No.11 can take you there, and it is one stop before the ChineseSchool. The flat is on the third floor with 3 rooms, one of which is bedroom, the other two arebathroom and kitchen. There are a bed, a sofa, a desk and some chairs in this 25 square metressmall fiat, and the rent is 500 yuan per month. Maybe this fiat is not as good as your wish, but I’lltry my best to meet your needs. If it is not suitable enough, write to me and I will look for anotherbetter place.Hope you will come here soon!All the best!Yours,Li Hua 满分理由本文格式正确，意思表述完整，行文流畅自然。作者在写作过程中注意长短句并用，还使用了以‘which，’引导的非限定性定语从句，从而使文章层次分明，富于变化，不愧为考场佳Dear Bob, Welcome to China! You wrote to me to find a place for you. I have found anapartment on Fangcao Street near Jianxin Chinese School. It is on the third floor and there’rethree rooms in it: a bedroom, a kitchen, and a bathroom. There is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chairin the bedroom. The house is 25 square metres and the rent is 500 yuan per month. Alsofrom this house you can get to your school easily. Just take the No.11 bus at the bus stop in frontof the building. It is only one stop. At last, will you please tell me the time you arrive? Then I’Ube able to meet you at the airport,see you.Best wishes !Yours,Li Hua 满分理由本文格式正确，内容完整，表述清楚，衔接紧密流畅，第 1 2 页 下一页