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原标题:上海近10年中考英语作文汇总,附历年优秀范文

中考英语作文占考试分值的比例越来越大,同学们在备考的时候要重视英语写作能力的提高。

上海中考近年来分值为20分,这20分所要考察的内容很全面,单词积累、句意理解、思路逻辑等都是考察之处。

历年中考题目虽有变化,但存在很大的延展性,英语作文考察方向、考察题材是可以参考的~

2009 2018上海中考英语作文题目集锦

从历年上海中考英语作文题目可以看出,不论是何种题材,整体都是以鼓励发表自己的看法为主;秉承着让考生有话可说,有内容可写的原则,描述其思想、亲身经历、感悟;可写的角度广泛,考生可任选一个内容或者角度进行切入。

中考英语作文评分标准

上海中考英语作文总分为20分,其中内容分8分、语言分8分、组织结构分4分。

以下为上海中考英语作文官方评分标准:

1.内容分8分。内容切题,意思连贯,表达清楚完整。

2.语言分8分。学生需用语规范,表达准确,无或少见语法错误,词汇拼写正确,句型使用恰当。首先是字数,少于60字的作文要酌情扣分。

3.组织结构分4分,也就是我们常说的文采分。根据学生使用复杂句型/单词和谚语/俗语的情况来加分。

英语作文答题扣分项

先划档次:

A档 18~15分

B档 14.5~12分

C档 11.5~8分

D档 3.5~0分

每少5个词扣0.5分,拼写错误每处扣0.5分,标点,大小写错误每2处扣0.5分;内容和语言表达总分达15分及以上,得2~3分;内容和语言总分13~14分,如确有好句型或表达用语,可酌情给1~2分;通篇句型,句式单一,词汇贫乏者,即使无语法错误,也不给分;开头句+给的几个参考点+结尾句+亮点。

然后再仔细批阅看有否语法错误,最后给出总分。

考生常出现的问题

1.内容空洞,没有清晰的思路,表达能力不强,总是用一些不合适的句子内容来表达,所以可能让老师觉得理由或是内容太假,当然也就得不了高分。

2.议论过多,描写不足。大多数情况下,我们把议论当成的作文的重点,所以常常会跑题。应当多描述提示的内容或加以想像,不能只翻译了事。

3.总是使用同一个主语写句子,重复太多。尽量使用不同的主语来表达,比如:I must learn English well. 就可以换成:It is importantfor me to learn English well.

4.结构散漫,想哪儿写哪儿,乱七八糟。应该使用总分或总分总的结构。

5.都是简单句,缺少复合句。多用状语从句,宾语从句,定语从句及一些重要的句型,也人教版新目标初二下英语同步辅导(一)初中二年级下un...初中二年级下Un...可以用用被动语态。

6.连词的使用较少,句子之间的连接很生硬。可以加入一些:比如: to my surprise 让我惊讶的是, what’s more(而且,还有)等,让上文与下文衔接更紧密。意思也能更流畅地表达。

中考英语作文应对技巧

通过对历年英语作文的分析,我们总结分析得出中考英语作文题型的几个特点,并为大家支招写作技巧。

一、透过英语作文折射文字背后的思考,考察90后一代所思所想,所喜所恶。

对答方案:

平时增加思考力,对喜欢的、不喜欢的都应培养自己的见解,15岁的孩子思维上已发展得非常健全。写作文时立意高就能得高分,尤其应该说出自己的心声,再提炼升华。

二、以“我”为中心,由对“小我”的关注放大到对“大我”的体察。

1、几乎每年题目中都有一个隐藏的”我“(I、me、my);

这是一个很好的提示,暗示学生由自己身边人,身边事出发,切忌泛泛而谈,空洞套话。掌握中考规律后,需要记住一个“我”,以我为中心即可;

2、关注他人,架构联系;

对答方案:

中考作文离不开话题四大类“个人、学校、家庭、社会”。考生应对日常生活应有所体察,对学校老师、同学这样的关键词敏感。

有一个技巧在这里教给大家,作文下笔前应在审题的基础上对题目进行拆分,请大家记住一个万能拆分法3W:Who / What 什么人或事;Why为什么;How怎么做,将此方法与“话题四大类”合并使用,文章即会逻辑清晰,言之有理。

三、对英文输出能力的重视。

任何一篇英语文章论宏观指框架结构,逻辑连接,论微观论句式句型、词汇词组,中考作文也不例外。这里抛砖引玉,与同学共勉。

1、连接词是王道:

连接词是中文语段中没有的词汇,也是英文写作中应该注意的重点。中文是高级语言,极其强大,只要对话双方或作者读者处于相同语境,无论思维跳跃多远总能拉扯上边。但英语中考作文中,中英文思维的差异性不可忽视,一句话只有一个主语、一个谓语,意思一旦表达完全,一句话就该马上终止。

以下连接词推荐同学们学会用到文章中。

开头:To begin with, To start with, Firstly, First of all。

表补充:not only… but also, furthermore, in addition, moreover,that is to say

表目的:in order to, so as to, so that

表转折:however, nevertheless, yet

2、砍杀第一词汇

要表达对一切“人、事、物”的喜爱之情是考生追求的,但简单一个"like"、"prefer"实难表达爱之深、情之切,此时完全可以自己总结归纳出一系列“喜欢”的词汇词组,如:

Be fond of English

Be crazy about English

Have a passion for English

Be enthusiam about English

词组间情感的强烈度请同学仔细体会。如果同学能够自己学会总结归纳,之后再出现“喜欢”这一词,就应该砍掉第一个浮现的简单词“like”,学会使用更准确的高级词组。

范文参考

小编还收集了近5年的中考英语范文,给大家作为参考。

2018年中考英语作文

My progress

Life is full of ups and downs, so is my middle school life.

I used to be a shy girl who dare not exchange my ideas with my classmates, which is extremely bad for my study. Therefore, I made up my mind to become more outgoing. At first, it was tough for me to involve myself in the group discussion or to join in after school activities. Luckily, with the encouragement from my friends, I managed to express my own thoughts and do some volunteering in my spare time. It seems that I am not that shy girl any more, which is definitely a great progress I have ever made.

Just as an old saying goes, a thousand li journey begins with the first step. However difficult it is, I should take the first step and make progress little by little.

2017年中考英语作文

There is always hope.

I used to be a weak girl who had lost heart in various physical activities. Every time I was faced with a physical exam, I couldnt help sweating and feeling nervous.However, after I read an article about a man who was born without arms and legs, everything changed.Instead of losing hope and giving up,he managed to live like a normal person. Through his story, I suddenly realized that there is always hope and nothing is impossible for a willing heart. Unexpectedly, I finally started to make progress in physical activities! After all, hope never fails to make a miracle,does it?

2016年中考英语作文

I’m Ready

I have always been longing for studying abroad, which is full ofchallenges as well as opportunities. Therefore, what I should do is to getready anytime.

As they say, chance favors the prepared mind. I always get myselfready both physically and mentally. First, I insist on taking exerciseregularly to build up my body. Besides, I spare no effort to learn English wellin order to integrate into the new environment as soon as possible. Last butnot least, it is necessary to cultivate a shinny optimistic attitude towardsdifficulties.

With great passion and determination, I amwell prepared and deeply convinced that a challenging but fulfilling study lifeis waiting for me.

2015年中考英语作文

I want to invent a flying car

It is not uncommon to meet traffic problems and serious air pollutionin big city. It is a must to have a plan to improve the serious condition.

I get an idea to design my own flying machine like a car which candrive well in the street as well as fly between the high rises to avoid thetraffic jam. What ’ s more, when it is moving, it can transform the motion energyinto electricity to drive the engine. Thus, it is possible to save a lot of fueland reduce the air pollution. It is of great use to solve the problems oftraffic jam and air pollution, and even save the natural resource.

Bright idea can only be achieved with the determination and courage.I believe my idea will turn a new leaf of future life.

2014年中考英语作文

ThisTime Next Year

Life ischangeable, and thats why everyone longs for the future, which is full ofchallenge as well as hope.

Perhaps I will have achievedmy goal this time next year, studying in a senior high school. Despite that,diligence will be still needed to make myself go further in English. Basically,it is important to concentrate in class and take notes carefully. Then, I willbenefit from reading English books. What is more, going abroad is of great usein improving my oral English. Only in this way can I progress in Englishendlessly.

Makeplans and go for what I want. And I believe when the challenge is coming, thehope is also around the corner.返回搜狐,查看更多

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