图表作文分类讲解
ThistableshowsthatJapanandCanadahadannualincomesof$15,760and$11,100perpersonrespectively.Thesefigureswereoverwhelminglygreaterthanthecorrespondingfigureof$160inPeru.Lifeexpectancyatbirthwashigheramongtheeconomicallydevelopedcountries.Japanreportedthehighestlifeexpectancy,whilePeruthelowest.Literacyratesamongadultswerealsohigherinwealthiercountries.JapanandCanadabothreportedliteracyrateof99%eachwhilePeruclaimed68%.
Thedataappearstoconfirmthelinkbetweennationalwealthandhealthandeducationstandards.
例2:NumberoffulltimeteachersofregularschoolsinmillionsinChina1960 1990
Thegraphshowsthenumberoffull timeteachersofregularschoolsinChinabetween1960and1990.Accordingtothefigure,therewasadecreaseinthenumberofteachersfrom1960to1962,whichwasfollowedbyarapidincreaseoverthenextthreeyears.Thenumberdroppedagainfrom1965to1966andthenwentupgraduallyuntil1976whentherewasalevelingoffforthenexttenyears.Theyearsfrom1986to1990sawasteadyriseinthenumberofteachers.Althoughtherewerefluctuationsinthenumberofteachersfrom1960to1990,thetrendwastowardsanincrease.
例3:ParticipationinHigherEducationinAustraliain1989
Thebarchartdescribestheparticipationinhighereducationbymalesandfemalesinurban,ruralandremoteareasinAustraliain1989.Itcanbeseenfromthechartthatsignificantlyfewerstudentsinhighereducationcamefromruralareasthanfromurbanareas,withanevensmallernumbercomingfromremoteareas.Inalllocations,femalestudentsoutnumberedmalestudentsinhighereducationinAustraliain1989.
例4:AverageweeklyexpenditureperfamilyinBritainin1977Foodanddrink26%Housingandpower19%Transportandcommunication14%Recreationandeducation9%Clothing8%Otheritems24%ThispiechartrepresentstheaverageweeklyfamilyexpensesinBritainin1977.26%wasspentonfoodanddrink,19%onhousingandpower,14%ontransportandcommunications,9%onrecreationandeducationand8%onclothing.Theremaining24%wasusedtomeetallotherexpenditures.
图1347,500Australiansagedbetween25and34holdadegree.Theirmainfieldsofstudywere%
1:Administration19.08%2:SocialSciences,Arts19.48%3:Others2.24%4:Law5.53%5:Medicine7.4%6:Architecture1.84%7:Engineering9.35%8:Veterinary2.10%9:Science,Maths,Computers18.19%10:Education14.76%图2104,80055 59year oldsholdadegree.Theirmainfieldsofstudywere%
1:Administration14.98%2:SocialSciences,Arts20.42%3:Others2.48%4:Law3.34%5:Medicine11.35%6:Architecture2.96%7:Engineering19.27%8:Veterinary2.0%9:Science,Maths,Computers10.11%10:Education13.17%ThesetwopiechartsshowthedifferencesbetweentwogroupsofAustralians25to34and55to69yearsoldintermsoftheirpost schoolqualifications.
Thefirstpointtonoteisthehugeincreaseinthenumberofpeoplewithqualifications.Theyoungergroupismorethanthreetimesbiggerthantheoldergroup347,500comparedto104,800.
Comparingthetwogroups,architectureandmedicinehaveexperiencedadecreaseinpopularitywithyoungergraduates;medicinedeclinedbyalmost4%.However,thebiggestlosswastoengineering,whichdecreasedfrom19.27%to9.35%ofthewhole.
Somesubjectsweremorepopularwiththeyoungeragegroup.ThebiggestgainsingraduatenumbersweremadebyScience,MathsandComputerswhich,asagroup,haveincreasedbyover8%,Administrationhasgainedby4.1%.
Tosumup,thegraphsshowathree foldincreaseinthenumberofgraduates.Themoststrikingchangeinsubjectpercentagesisthedecreaseinthenumberofengineeringgraduates.
因此,从以上事例中可以看出来分析图表在写作中的重要性,规律的寻找,对比的描写对于反映图表的状态和变化起到了至关重要的作用。特此,以下两点需要注意:
1:图表作文比较客观,要使用明确的时态和语态,一般都采用过去时;表示未来的一个过程或者程序,一般用被动语态或者将来是表达。
2:图表作文末尾段一般不需要单独的评论,“描述”不是“评论”,发表个人见解是不合适的,因此不能出现第一人称,也不要出现therefore,thus或者hence等引人联想的词语。
下面我们就图表作文如何开头做一讲解,即“二词一语”(名词+动词+介词短语),也就是图表作文写作必不可少的“三要素”
1图表作文开头常用句式与动词(重要,经典)
Thetable/chartshows/describes/unfoldsthat……….
Thegraph/figures/statisticsshow/reveal/identify/illustrate/
reflect/indicate/displaythat……..
Accordingtothetable/chart…………………
Asisshowninthediagram………………….
Ascanbeseenfromthegraph/figures……………..
Itcanbeseenfromthetable/chart…………….
Wecanseefromthe…………………………..
Itisclear/apparent/evidentfromthediagram/graph/figuresthat…………
1表达数据或者统计数字方式的句子:
Ahasalmost/nearlya/onequarterofthetotalnumberofB
Ahasapproximately/abouta/onethirdofthetotalnumberofB
Ahasjustover/overa/onehalfofthetotalnumberofB
AhasoverthreequartersofthetotalnumberofB
Ahasalmost/nearly/approximately/About/just/overaquarter/half/threequarters/twice/threetimesasmany……/asmuchasB.Ahasexactly/precisely/about/approximatelythesamenumber/proportion/amountof…….asB(3)表示增加,减少和波动可使用下面的两种结构: