漫画作文写作
一.漫画作文概述
高考英语考试说明写作部分第二节表述为:“要求考生根据所给情景,用英语写一篇100个单词左右的短文(山东卷为120—150词)。情景包括目的、对象、时间、地点、内容等;提供情景的形式有图画、图表、提纲等。
因此,图画是高考作文所提供的情景之一。从最近几年高考试题来看,图画类作文占据了相当大的比重,当然主要是以记叙文为主。而漫画又是图画的表现形式之一。漫画的含义是:漫画是一种具有强烈的讽刺性或幽默性的图画。画家从生活现象中取材,通过夸张、比喻、象征等手法,来讽刺、批评或表扬某些人和事。它与图画相比,更能够与社会现实紧密结合起来,在大学英语四六级考试和研究生英语入学考试中应用的较为广泛。同时在高考中出现的频率也越来越高,例如在上海卷、北京卷及山东卷中都出现过漫画作文。
二.漫画作文的特点 1.试题命题特点
漫画作文的主要特点是生动、形象、直观、图文并茂。它就要求考生在写作时做到主题明确,即文章能概括图画所反映的中心思想。 2.能力考查特点
漫画作文要求考生具有敏锐的观察力、丰富的想象力、严谨的逻辑思维能力、冷静的分析能力,以及最终将以上能力表达出来的书面表达能力。 三.漫画作文的写作思路
一般的漫画作文一般可分为三个步骤,即: 1describe the drawing briefly.
2 explain its intended meaning and give examplesif necessary 3give your own comments or opinions 各部分常用的表达 描述图画部分:
1From the cartoon we can see that… 2 As is shown/indicated in the picture
3This is a funny and instructive picture, from which we can see… 4Look at the picture. It is a picture about… 论述漫画寓意及所反映现象部分
1 What it illustrates is a common phenomenon in today’s society./ Apparently, the cartoon reflects a major social problem.
2 This sight reminds me of something in my daily life. 3 What the cartoon reflects set me thinking a lot.
4After seeing the picture, I was greatly shocked by the phenomenon. In today’s society,… 5The cartoon implies that…… 评论与观点部分
1As far as I’m concerned, what we have to do is to make full use of……and also……If we……and……, it will not only……but also……
2We can learn from the picture that
3Consequently, it is high time that measures should be taken to avoid this phenomenon from happening again.
4Therefore, I am firmly convinced that…
5 Let’s call on everybody to……In the long run, it will have a negative influence on constructing a harmonious society. 本部分常用的高级表达方式 普通表达方式 In my opinion 高级表达方式 As far as I’m concerned, Speaking for myself, in my view, to my mind We should…. we are supposed to, it’s necessary that First, … Second… in the first place…in the second place;/ for one thing…for another;/on one hand, on the other hand In fact in reality, in effect, practically, as a matter of fact, actually, virtually If…, we will… Only if…will we.. I’m sure… I’m fully convinced that, I strongly believe that
四.典例分析
经典回放06山东卷
请用英语写一篇100词左右的短文,简要描述漫画内容,并结合生活实际, 就漫画主题发表感想,题目自拟。参考词汇:公民道德—civic virtue One possible Version:
Who lost your civic virtue?
Let’s look at the picture above. It is about a boy who picks up a book on civic virtue and he
is looking for its owner. But let’s pay attention to the passers by. One boy is throwing rubbish and one of the couple is spitting.
Something occurs to me. The owner of the book not only lost a book, but also his civic virtue.
It is our duty to obey the principle made for our behaviors. And parents should set examples for their children to teach them to protect the environment. As we all know, kids always do as their parents do.
Let’s call on everybody to do the tiny things we meet in our daily life to make our earth, our
homes cleaner and more beautiful.
范文分析这篇文章分为三段,第一段描述了图画的内容,第二段就图画所反映的问题进行了论述,第三段提出了观点并发出了号召。同时每段的第一句都是过渡性的词语,使文章显得层次分明,结构明了。同时文章有效地运用了连接成分和高级句型与表达,提高了文章的档次。 写作步骤在写作时,可以用以下的问题问自己! 1. What’s the type of the writing?
A.说明文 B. 书信 C. 夹叙夹议 D.人物传记 2. What’s the tense and person of the writing? 3. 在写漫画类作文时,应认真审题,注重文章结构。
The writing contains there parts: 简要描述漫画内容、 (说明漫画所反映的社会现状)、 (发表自己的观点和看法)。 1 How many people can you see? 2 What are they doing?
3 Whose behavior is to blame first? 4 What does the cartoon reflect?
4. What’s the tone of the author?
A. subjective B. objective C. critical D. indifferent 5. Pay attention to beautiful expressions in the passage
1 Description of cartoon: 2 Reflection of cartoon: 3 Author’s opinion: