2015年云南中考英语作文和范文Growing up with …

Growing up with …

提示：在你的成长过程中，一定有人陪伴你、帮助你、影响你、感动你，让你能够健康快乐地成长。请以”Growing up with …”为题，用英语写一篇短文。

要求：1.请把题目补充完整；

2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个；

3.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；

4.将短文写在答题卡上。写在本试题卷上无效。

One possible version

Growing up with father

My father always loves me and tries to help me.

When I was seven years old, I started my primary school. I had to get up early and did homework every day. I was so tired that I didn’t like to go to school. Then my father told me a lot of stories on my way to school, and helped me to plan my time. Day by day, I knew the importance of learning, and became interested in reading books.

No matter what difficulties I meet, my father is by my side. I am sure I will grow up better with my father.

书面表达评分标准

一档：（8 10分）：内容切题、层次清楚、语言流畅、基本无语言表达错误。

二档：（6 7分）：内容切题、层次比较清楚、语言比较流畅、语言表达错误较少。

三档：（4 5分）：内容基本切题、层次不够分明、语言表达错误较多。

四档：（1 3分）：有一定内容、但语言表达错误很多。

（注意：书面表达语法错误全卷扣分不得超过2分；单词拼写错误全卷扣分不得超过2分；抄袭卷中阅读材料的，抄袭部分不给分。）