小学六年级英语作文范文10篇附评语

小学六年级范文10篇（附评语）

Our teacher

Miss Li is our English teacher. She is tall and thin. Her hair is long, brown and curly. She is a young woman with glasses. Miss Li loves her job very much. Because she likes to stay together with her students. She is friendly to us. She often says: I love you, you must study hard!

Yes, we will. We love you,too. We answered.

六（1） 井贺

My favourite season

There are four seasons in a year. They are spring, summer, fall and winter. Spring is my favourite season.

In spring, the weather is warm, and the flowers bloom开放. We can take off my winter clothes. And we can put on our beautiful SPRING clothes. Wonderful!

I like spring best. Because the days get longer. So I can go out for a walk with my friends. Greart!六（2） 张小林

通过小作者的描写把温暖的春天描写的如此美好，真实地写出了自己的感受。希望同学们都要向小林学习啊！

My school

Our school is called Nan Guan Primary School . There are a lot of students and teachers in it. It s famous for its achievement and its beautiful environment.

On the playground, there are all kinds of plants in turns. And if you stand a place, you can see lots of NOTES and SIGNS . For example, Be quite, please. Don t litter the rubbish. And so on. It makes you feel our school sacred神圣的. In the evening, all the lights are turned on. Everywhere are clear like the days.

I love Nan Guan Primary School . Welcome to our school!

六（2） 陈卓

What will you do on International Day?

The International Day is coming. I want to go to Xinhua bookshop. And I will buy something to eat. Then I will stay at home ,read my new books and eat my food. 六（1） 刘新文

I like sports very much, I will go to my uncle`s home. They live on the hill. I can climb mountains with my uncle. And I can pick up wild fruit.I think I have a good time. 六（3） 李岩

This holiday, I will finish my homework first. Then I will go fishing with my father. In the open air, I can enjoy the clear air. It`s very interesting. 六（4） 张明月

My rabbits

I have two lovely rabbits. Each of them has got a round head,round eyes,long ears, short legs and a small tail.

One is white, and the other is brown. They like to eat vegetables, and they like to eat the food on my hands. We are good friends. I love my rabbits.

六（3）代昂

Mr. Guo点评：短短的几句描述，就把两只可爱活泼的小兔展现在我们面前。希望代昂同学能再接再励，写出更好的文章来。

My father

My father is forty three years old. He is a teacher. He works very hard. He always wears a yellow coat and a pair of blue trousers. He like doing sports and he likes basketball best.

My father loves me very much. He cheeks my homework every day. He often buys delicious food for me. On weekends we often go to the park with my mother. I love my father.

六（4）祖宣

Mr. Guo点评：祖宣同学的这篇小作文熟练使用了一般现在时态中的第三人称单数用法，行文流畅，字里行间流露出对父亲的尊敬和喜爱。

A happy day

Yesterday was Sunday. My father, my mother and I went shopping.

First, we went to the supermarket on foot. We bought some pineapples and oranges there. My mother bought a nice T shirt for me. It is yellow and white. I like it very much. Then we went to the bookshop.There were so many kinds of books. I bought three English storybooks. After that we went home by bus.

What a happy day!

六（4）刘蔚

My cat

I like animals very much. But I like cats best. Her name is Mimi. She is very lovely. She has a small black nose and a long tail. Her legs are short. When I get home, She always wags her tail and walks up to me. When she feels hungry, she meows loudly .Now she`s very fat.

I love my little cat very much.

六（1）郭佳蒙

Mr. Guo点评：简洁流畅的语言向大家描述了一只讨人喜爱的小猫。

Mr. Chocolate

Hi, I`m Mr. Chocolate. Do you like me? I usually wear a black and white dress. Look at me, am I beautiful? I`m very sweet, so many children like me. I hope we can become good frends! Oh, it`s time to go to school.I must go. Goodbye! 六（3）姜小蒙

Mr. Guo点评：本篇文章字数不多，但作者用其丰富的想像力和拟人的修辞手法把一块巧克力描绘的生动形象，郭老师要给小蒙同学一个Excellent!要继续努力呦！

My family

I have a happy family. In my family there are four people. They are my father, my mother, my brother and I. My father is a businessman. My mother is a farmer. My brother and I are students. I m thirteen years old. I m in Class One, Grade Six. My brother is in Class Two, Grade Four. We help each other, we love each other.