英语七年级上册第八单元作文指导

Hello, boys and girls. My name is Li Jun. I am 33 years old. My birthday is on June 5th. I am your new English teacher from now on. My favoritecolor is green and I like watching TV, too.

We have some interesting and fun things for you in October. It is a great month. School Day is on October 5th. And we have a football game on October 13th. Seven days later, we have an English party. On October 26th, wehave an art festival.

This is a really busy term! Have a good time

点评：1， 写作思路清晰，有层次。第一段介绍自己，第二段说明10月的活动安排。语言简练，顺畅。

2， like doing, from now on, seven days later 等短语的运用为文章增色很多。

3，最后一句This is a really busy term! Have a good time!既说明了这个月的忙碌，又表达了对大家的祝愿。