my ideal bedroom我理想的房间英语作文

时间:2010 03 15来源:英语作文网栏目:作者:作文地带 收藏: my perfect bedroom理想的：ideal ,perfect我理想的卧室或我理想的房间 正文如下： my perfect bedroom I want to have a room of my own. The color of wall is shallow blue. I have a table by the window big white... So when I was reading a book, I can see

my perfect bedroom理想的：ideal ,perfect我理想的卧室或我理想的房间

正文如下：my perfect bedroomI want to have a room of my own. The color of wall is shallow blue. I have a table by the window big white... So when I was reading a book, I can see the birds flying in the sky on desk, I want to take some books I will put this cute bear in bed on the other side of a small table in this, and my computer, I want to use it to communicate with my good friends. Of course, when Im free, I want to play with them.

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原文作文地带提示：下文有错误语法，只为下面点评之用，如需正确内容，请参考上面的范文：my idel bedroom

I want to have a room of my own.The colour of the wall is light blue.I want a big white desk near the window.So while Im reading book,I can see the birds flying in the sky.On the desk Iwant to put some books.And I will put the lovely bear on the bed.On the other side there is a small desk.On it,theres my computer.I like to use it to conmunicate with my good friends.Certainly.When Im free I would like to play with them.

作文地带点评原文：I want to have a room belongs to myselfbelong to sb:属于某人）.The colour of the wall is light blue.I also want a big white desk to be near the window在...旁边：be near....So when Im reading books,I can see the birds flying in the sky,too. I want to put some books on the desk.And I will put the lovely bear on the bed.On the other side, there is a small desk.My computer is on it .I like chatting with my good friends with it在网上聊天，用 chat 更加亲切，还有 使用... 一般用 ...with it ）.Certainly when Im free I like to play with games on it.（play with 如果对象是人，翻译为 和某人玩 ；对象是物的话，翻译是 玩什么东西 。我猜你的意思是 在空闲的时候打游戏 吧？）

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