帮我改改我的英语作文吧高中谁能帮我修改我的作文 老师说我错了好多 可是我要是能找

帮我改改我的英语作文吧（高中）谁能帮我修改我的作文,老师说我错了好多,可是我要是能找的出来就不会错了,它的题目是“为什么越来越多的城市人愿意去乡村度过周末.而乡村人却越来越愿意来城市度过周末”100词左右Nowadays ,with the development of society,an increasing number of people living in the city tend to have a weekend in the countryside.They drive cars to the countryside from the city for fishing、hiking during their weekend.They claim that the fresh air is of great benefit to their health.In addition they can enjoy the beautiful view of the countryside.They can relax themselves as well.On the contrary,the people living in the countryside are likely to take the buses to the city for shopping or watching movies so that they can improve their life.In the case of me,I think ,although the city would be able to a lot of convinced,but it be admitted that,city has more air with polluted and more noise,when compared with the countryside.Therefore,I prefer to go to the countryside during my weekend. 英语作业帮用户2017 11 06

帮我改改我的英语作文吧高中谁能帮我修改我的作文 老师说我错了好多 可是我要是能找的出来就不会错了 它的题目是“为什么越来越多的城市人愿意去乡村度过周末.而乡村人却越来越作业帮