小学六年级英语作文及点评

导语英语作文，是指用英语针对某一内容写出一篇文章，是英语考试最常见的一种题目类型，英语作文要求阅读、写作能力比较高，也是考生最容易失分的题型。以下是无忧考网整理的《小学六年级英语作文及点评》，希望帮助到您。 Zoom’s Weekend

Zoom had a busy weekend. On Saturday morning, he washed his clothes and went to a park. He did his homework and went fishing on Saturday afternoon. On Sunday morning, he cleaned his room and visited his grandparents. He played football and watch TV on Sunday afternoon. Zoom was too tired.

要领点评

写法：这篇习作是按时间顺序记叙了Zoom的周末活动。

时态：这篇文章可以用三种时态来写，由于本单元主要讲的是一般过去时态，所以我们采用一般过去时态比较合适。

句型：主语+动词过去式+过去时间。

注意：活动的相关表达法采用新旧知识结合的方法，但要注意动词过去式的拼写。A Farewell Party

It’s the end of the school year. The students in Class Three have a farewell party. They invite their parents to the party. Many students have performance at the party.

Look! Chen Jie is singing songs. Zhang Peng is playing the piano. Sarah is playing the erhu. Mike is doing Chinese Kung fu. What is Miss White doing? She is dancing.

Everybody has a lot of fun. But Liu Yun isn’t here. She has a cold. She is at home. The classmates are going to visit her after party. They prepare many gifts fot her. And they will take a picture together.

点评：

写法：这篇习作记叙了一个告别晚会。记叙了学年末的告别晚会上大家都表演了什么节目，以及晚会后大家要去看望刘芸的故事。

时态：这篇习作可采用三种时态来写。由于本单元主要出现的时态是一般将来时和现在进行时，所以这里我们才用一般现在时，现在进行时和一般将来时来写。

句型：

一般现在时：主语+动词原形+其他。

现在进行时：主语+现在分词+其他。

一般将来时：主语+ be going to / will +动词原形+其他。

注意：由于本篇文章中所涉及的时态比较多，所以要注意一下时态的变化。学生们都在表演什么节目可以用现在进行时，将要去做什么，要用将来时。另外还要注意，一般现在时在肯定句中，主语是第三人称单数，谓语动词也要用第三人称单数。 Tom’s Holiday

Tom went to Beijing by plane on his holiday. Every day he had fun with his parents. They went to the Nature Park. They saw elephants. They went swimming. They ate lots of delicious food. They also took many beautiful pictures. They will come back home tomorrow. In a word, they enjoy their holiday.

要领点评

写法：这篇习作是按照地点的顺序记叙假期里的活动，记叙了假期里去北京做了哪些活动以及对活动的感受。

时态：这篇文章可采用两种时态来写。由于本单元主要讲述的是一般过去时的用法，所以这里大部分我们采用一般过去时比较合适。

句型：主语+动词过去式+其他?? 主语+will+动词原形+其他

注意：活动的相关表达法可采用旧知识和新知识相结合去写，但要注意动词过去式的变化规则。例：eat 的过去式为ate，为不规则变化。

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