中考英语作文高分技巧

：”六大病症“初中生写作 2审题不清，抓不住要点，东拉西扯； 1 单词拼写错误； 2 frist ,belive, ture, buzy, quite quiet … 动词缺失； 3 Eg: I happy I can go to Peking.）前后不一致（数、人称、时态、主谓不一致等）4 Eg: All people have their own dream.He said he wants to have a good rest. （）中式英语（Chinglish5 Eg: I very like sports.6 综合性错误。 包括单词大小写、标点符号以及形容词副词的混淆、连词的缺失误用、句子结构不完整等。中考英语作文评分标准? 满分档（15分）：长度符合要求（80 90字），书写规范， 涵盖所有要 点，结构规范，条理清楚，逻辑严密，词 汇丰富，没有任何语法错误。? 第五档（12 14分）：文本长度符合要求，书写规范，涵 盖所有要点，结 构规范，条理清楚，逻辑严密，词汇比 较丰富有少量语法错误。? 第四档（9 11分）：文本长度符合要求，书写规范，基本 涵盖要点（有2 要点得给9 10分），行文比较连贯，词汇 不够丰富，有一些语法错误。? 第三档6 8分：文本长度与要求有明显距离，书写不规范， 要点不完整 （只有1个要点），行文不连贯，词汇量不足， 错误较多，勉强能看出作文意图。? 第二档（3 5分）：能用句子表达，错误百出，只能勉强 猜测出作文意图。? 第一档（0 2分）：有一些英语单词，但与话题毫不相干。（白卷0分）中考英语高分作文的特点1、开头言简意赅，不啰嗦，不偏题，迅速引入 主题。2、段与段之间，自然过渡。有合适的连接词。 3、句与句之间，有恰当的连接词，使之自然成 一体。4、全文中同一个意思，基本没有重复使用某一 个词、短语或者句型等，说明这个同学的词汇 量不同寻常。老师自然就对该作文有好感了。5、能够恰当使用谚语、格言等给文章添彩。二、中考英语高分作文的特点6、书写工整，书面整洁，很少有涂改痕迹。 7、分段合理。全文分段一般不止一个自然段， 让阅卷老师很容易就能找到作文所要求写的要 点和重要句子。 8、要点齐全。 9、首尾呼应，自然成一体。 10、使用了大量的高级词汇和句型。阅卷老师 一看就知道这个同学的功底非不一般，自然就 给打高分了。英语作文 注意交叉使用长短句吴轶佳说，在5月份长春市模拟考试当中，很多同学都觉得大作文不太容易 写好，不容易得高分。我们容易忽略的一个重要问题是我们面对的是高中老师来 批改我们初三学生的作文，高中老师的要求水准，他们指导高考作文的习惯，他 们对于作文的品位和要求都可能与我们平时的思维习惯有所不同，所以文章的可 读性就更能成就一篇完美的中考作文。吴轶佳建议，英语作文在整个写作过程中，要适当选择恰当的连词来表示文 中的并列、转折、选择、条件、因果等关系，并且注意句子结构的变化，避免重 复和单调。? Making an invition 考试中的写作是一种控制性写作，在至多25分钟的时间内要实现审题，列提纲，打草稿，修改草稿，打磨语言，并准确，美观地誊写在答题卡上。在英语写作中，过多地使用长句和短句都不好，正确的做法是，根据实际情 况，在文章当中交叉使用长短句。综合使用各种所谓的“高级”结构。在适合的 语境当中，在自己十分有把握的情况下，使用一句名言警句来增加文章的色彩。 但是在大型考试的考场上，不鼓励现场原创的语言，还是尽量使用平时老师给批 改过的，教材中有的，你十分熟悉和有把握的语言。这样的作文才会在紧张的情 绪影响之下少犯错误中考英语写作高分“秘笈”? 要点齐全 过渡自然 ? 首尾相呼 分段提行 ? 连词增色 名句添光 ? 长短得当 高分有望如何逐步培养和提 升英语写作能力？写作能力的引导 二词汇短语 句子词汇短语同时,词汇是学生用英语表达思想 也是写作的基础和源泉。”攻关秘笈“词汇短语1. 词汇的巧妙记忆。 （children; believe… 加强中考课标词汇、短语的听默写。 .23. 鼓励学生（尤其是优等生）坚持课外阅读，并用“积 累”本收集高频词汇、短语、佳句，加强记忆。的词汇。”高端“鼓励学生使用 .4 Eg: I am very interested in pop music.= show/take great interest in I have lots of homework to do every day.=endless/oceans ofPlaying too much computer is bad for our study.=gets in the way of = have a bad influence on词不离句，完整、准确、 新颖、丰富的句式表达是一篇好 文章的必备条件。有效的句式教学基本句式。”五大“帮助学生掌握认清 .1 背、听写、加强中考相关话题必备佳句的朗读 .2 。句子翻译以及课外佳句的积累、诵、仿写 的句式变换中不断积攒实战经”多样“让学生在 .3 验。3. “多样”的句式变换）合并为简单句；1Eg: My brother helped me in maths. I made great progress. I made great progress in maths with the help of mybrother .）学会使用感叹句；2 It is necessary to help others. ！How necessary it is to help others善用复合句； 3 a. We need to help people. The people are in trouble.We need to help the people who are in trouble.b. We know that more and more students like pop songs. As we all know, more and more students like pop songs.）巧妙使用强调句；4 We can achieve our dreams by working hard.can we achieve our ,Only by working hard dreams.一周两至三句）积累丰富的谚语 5英语谚语短小精悍，简洁明快，韵律优美，寓意深刻，在写作中适当引用谚语能增强 文章的说服力和感染力。As the saying goes, “1 锻炼对学生有好处As the saying goes, “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.”It is good for us students to take exercise. 2 集中注意力于学习As the saying goes, “No pains, no gains.”We should concentrate our mind on our studies.其他谚语:1.Think twice before you do.2.Practice makes perfect.3.Where there is a will, there is a way.4.Failure is the mother of success.5.An apple a day keeps the doctor away.6.All roads lead to Rome.7. Every coin has two sides.1. 水节水方法 To make the limited water last long,…… 1 we’d better turn off the taps or showers while we are washing hair or brushing teeth. 2 it’s good to save water by reusing the used water to flush the toilet冲厕所. 2.交通方式自己、告诉他人 In order to reduce the air pollution, …… 1 we should either walk or take the bus to school. 2 We are supposed to tell our parents to ride bikes or take the subway as much as possible.3. 电节电方法 Don’t forget to turn off lights and TVs when we leave the room so that we can save the energy目的 4. 纸 In order to make full use of paper, …… 1 it’s necessary for us to collect used paper and books and recycle them. 2. we need to use both sides of it5. 购物袋 To reduce the white pollution, …… we are supposed to take our own bags instead of plastic bags when we go shopping. 6. 植树造林 We’d better plant trees as many as possible instead of cutting them down. In this way ，we can make the world greener and the air fresher.词不离句，句不离篇。能够灵活自如地运用所学的词汇、短语、句型、语 —— 谋篇布局写出精彩的文段是训练学生写作的最终目的。,法遣词造“如何运用已有的 能力在写作实践中学会”句 ”谋篇布局““战无不胜” 呢？1）表并列补充关系的：What is more，Besides，… 2 表示转折关系的过渡词：but, yet, however … 3 表示时间关系的过渡词：first, second, third, andthen, finally, after, before, after a few days, at last, at that time, later, in the past, immediately, in the meanwhile, when, while, then, after that …4 表示空间关系的过渡词：near to, far from, in the front of, beside, behind, beyond, above, below, to the right, to the left, on one side, on the other side of, outside …5 表示比较关系的过渡词：in the same way,just like, just as … 6 表示对照关系的过渡词：but, still, yet,however, on the other hand, in spite of, even though … She came in spite of her cold. Force a laugh in spite of pain. 7 表示WI递ceam进n eh关teslpo系myo的euf.r过Mieon渡rdeso词vaen：rd,yoatuhlessrhoop,ueaoldpnrledli,yntoahndedyniotiu,ortnso.eolf.,in addition, moreover, again … 8 表示因果关系的过渡词：because, since,then, thus, so, therefore ,as a result… 9 表示解释说明的过渡词：for example, in fact,in this case, for, actually …10 表示强调的过渡词：in fact, indeed, necessarily, certainly, without any doubt, truly, most important …11 表示目的的过渡词：for this reason, for this purpose, so that, in order that, so as to, in order to, …12 表示列举的过渡词：for example , such as …13 表示总结性的过渡词：in conclusion, finally, at last, in brief, in a word, in general, all in all, in a word, generally speaking …? He has his faults, but, all in all, he is a good helper.英语写作中用好“四心”? 1.精心审题，沉着写稿 ? 2.耐心修改，提炼句子 ? 3.细心检查, 消灭错误 ? 4.虚心抄写，一丝不苟。议论文写作技巧? 议论文是作者对某个问题或某件事进行分析、评论,表明 自己的观点、立场、态度、看法和主张的一种文体。议论 文有三要素,即论点、论据和论证。论点的基本要求是:观 点正确,认真概括,有实际意义;论据的基本要求是:真实可 靠,充分典型;论证的基本要求是:推理必须符合逻辑。? 英语议论文的结构一般较为固定,通常包括以下三部分: ? 1. 在导语部分提出需要议论的议题; ? 2. 在正文部分对所提出的问题进行议论; ? 3. 在结论部分对以上的讨论进行总结和归纳。let`s see some examplesShall we send children to study abroad?? With more and more people becoming rich in recent years, it is a new tendency for them to send their children to study abroad. But I don’t think it is a good idea. First of all, children are too young to look after themselves. Second, the language barrier is a serious problem. Many children are not proficient in the foreign language before going abroad. As a result, they have difficulty in understanding what the native speakers are talking about. Third, they may get into trouble when dealing with various situations for lack of knowledge of the customs in the strange land. Furthermore, the cost of living is much higher than that in our country, which might cause a heavy burden to the family.? In conclusion, there are more disadvantages in sending children to study abroad. So, we’d better not do it.Learn To Respect Our ParentsNowadays, more and more families have only one child. As most of the students today are the only child in the family, they often regard themselves as the center of the family and become selfish, without caring too much about their parents.So we should learn to respect our parents. Firstly, we are supposed to remember our parents’ birthday and express our best wishes to them. Secondly, we should say hello to our parents when we see them returning home. Thirdly, we are supposed to tell our parents where we go when we leave home.In a word, respecting parents is our China’s traditional values. No matter how old we are, it’s necessary for us to respect our parents.On the one hand, computer has many advantages. It can help people finish work quickly. And it also can help people to do more and more work. It’s not noly a good way for students to receive education but also it’s very convenient for people to communicate with others by using computers.On the other hand, it has some disadvantages. Computer can work out difficult math problems that students can’t. But it may make them be lacking in thinking. And if you often work with computer, maybe you will get sick. Some people surf the Internet all day, they waste much time and have no time to care for the real people.So we should have a right way to deal with the greatest invention —— computer.My Favorite PlacesMany people have favorite places they like to go to when they are feeling sad or bored. I also have favorite places that I go to as often as I can.Here are the three places that I like most. First of all, I like the zoo.The animals are amazing because some are so cute and some are so ugly! I like to pet宠 them,feed them and watch them perform. Museums are cool places, too. They have good exhibits陈 列品and fascinating displays吸引人的展品. I like the works of art 艺术品there. Some museums teach me a lot about history and science. From dinosaurs to robots, I love them all. Finally, theme parks are my favourite place. I think the roller coasters are the best. Its fun to scream and getscared. These places always cheer me up快活）. I try to go to each ofmy favorite places once a year. I am going to find more favorite places to go to when I grow up.作文走向预测及参考范文 ? 1. 最近，老师布置了一道作业，就 “Can parents be friends?” 这一 问题在同学中间开展一次调查，下表是调查的结果：45%的同学可能父母太 忙，没有时间关心他们。55%的同学可能在家里，父母常常和他们谈心，像 朋友一样。你的观点??请根据以上调查数据，写一份80词左右的调查报告。报告的开头已给出。? I recently surveyed 调查my classmates about their views观点 on whether parents can befriends.? According to the survey, 45% of the students in our class think it impossible to make friends with their parents as they’re always too busy to show their concern. On the other hand, 55% of the students believe they can make friends with their parents because their parents often talk with them like friends at home. In my opinion, it’s just natural for parents and children to be friends so long as they trust each other, the parents often talk with their children and know how to share.? 2. 爱是心中的太阳，融化你我身边的冰雪。假设你是李 明，你们学校的“English Garden”正在举办主题为“付 出即是收获”的征文活动，请你联系自己平时的爱心行为 和感受写一篇文章投稿。? 要求：1.文中不得出现真实人名和校名等相关信息。2.80—100词。标题和文章开头已给出，不计入Giving is ReceivingMy name is Li Ming. I like helping othersbecause I think it makes me very happy. I oftenhelp my classmates with their schoolwork.Sometimes I help clean up my house. I go to theold peoples home and do some cleaning for themonce a month. I often visit the Childrens Hospitalto cheer the sick kids up. I read stories and singsongs for them. I also help people in trouble. Ithink giving is receiving. Helping others is helpingourselves. Do you agree with me??3. 假如你叫李华，参加学校开展的“有困难向谁求助”（Whom do you turn to when in trouble?）的调查活动，调查结果如下。请用英语给校报编辑写一封信反映相 关内容。 ? 求助对象：同学、朋友，58%，年龄相仿，容易理解交流。老师家长，30%，有爱 心、有经验、可以 信任。无，12%，不愿与人交流，难以与人沟通。 ? 注意：1．内容要点全面，并表达出你的观点。为了使文章连 贯，可适当增加内容。 2．词数：90词左右。Dear editor,? I’m a student . We have made a survey－“Who do you turn to when in trouble?” Here are the results. Most of the students will go to their classmates or friends when in trouble as they’re almost of the same age, so they have a lot in common and understand each other easily. Some students will tell their teachers or parents about their troubles and ask them for help as the teachers and parents have rich experience and love them very much. They can be trusted by these students.Only a few students solve their problems all by themselves. They hate to talk with others and can’t get on well with others. They have few friends.? In my opinion, when in trouble we’d better ask our teachers, parent, friends or classmates for help.YoursLi Hua? 4、台湾自古以来是中国领土不可分割的一部分，尽早解决台湾问题，实现祖 国的完全统一，是中华儿女的共同期盼。假定你们正举行“我心中的台湾” 主题班会，请你根据提示写篇短文。1：台湾是中国的一部分 2：我所知道的台湾（地理位置、人口或其他资讯）3：台湾与祖国大陆的民间交往（走亲访友、商业往来、兴办工厂等） 4：词语准备： Taiwan Island, Taiwanese, the mainland, many kinds of ,beautiful , relative, shop ,factory, lie. Visit, build , run.There is but one China and Taiwan is part of China.Taiwan, the biggest island, lies to the southeast of FujianProvince. The weather there is warm and wet.So manyplants grow very well. The fruit there are reallydelicious,like bananas,oranges and so on. It has apopolation of 23.000.000.Taiwan produces many kinds ofproducts,especially seafood. It is a very beautiful island.Riyuetan Pool AND Mount Ali are very famous places ofinterest , Now many Taiwanese come to the mainland, theyvisit their relatives and friends, and some of them buildfactores and run shops, I love Taiwan very much and Ihope I can visit Taiwan some day. China is getting strongerand stronger. All the people hope Taiwan can come backquickly. I’m sure Taiwan will come back in the future.? 5.阳光运动工程Sunshine sports program Dear Jane,Thank you for your last letter asking about our sunshine sports program.Now I tell you some sports in our school. Many students doing sports one hour everyday. Different students have different interests. Some boys like playing football, because they love it. Most girls like shopping, because they think it relaxing. But most boys like playing Chinese Kongfu, because they believe it can help they keep healthy. And some girls like dancing, because they want to keep fit.I think the sunshine sports program is very important for us. Because the study of students very hard. Sports can also let brains have a good rest so that our study will be more effective. And it can helpyou relax.? 7. 许多学习生活中的烦恼都会使人产生压力,为了更好地发现及解 决同学们中存在的心理压力问题,你们班特意开展了一次以Less Pressure, Better Life为主题的英语演讲比赛,请你准备发言稿,谈谈你 的一些缓解压力的好办法,与同学分享,内容包括：●同学们中普遍存在的压力是什么；●我的压力是什么；●我是如何成功缓解我的压力的。参考范文:Less Pressure, Better LifeHello, boys and girls!Pressure is a serious problem in today’s world. Students inour class are under too much pressure. Some students can’t get onwell with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams.I’m always under pressure, too. My parents want me to be thetop student in class. So they send me to all kinds of training classesat weekends.Last Monday evening, I had a talk with my mother. I told her Iwas not lazy. I really felt tired. I needed time to relax. My motheragreed with me at last. So I think a conversation with parents isnecessary to solve the problem.That’s all. Thank you!Less Pressure, Better LifeHello, boys and girls!Pressure is a serious problem in today’s world. Students in our class are under too much pressure. Some students can’t get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams.I’m always under pressure, too. My parentswant me to be the top student in class. So they send me to all kinds of training classes at weekends.Last Monday evening, I had a talk with mymother. I told her I was not lazy. I really felt tired. Ineeded time to relax. My mother agreed with me atlast. So I think a conversation with parents isnecessary to solve the problem.That’s all. Thank you!? 8. 幸福是什么？幸福是父母为你营造的温馨的家，幸福是老师望向你的 赞许的目光，幸福是孤独时朋友送来的一杯奶茶，幸福是…… 请以My happiness为话题，写一件曾经发生过的令你感到幸福的事情。? 要求：条理清晰，语言流畅，用词准确, 字迹工整，80－90词。Happiness is important in our life. In fact , happinessis always around you if you put your heart into it.I will never forget one thing. Once, I had a bad markat a math test. I was shy and afraid to meet my parents.But when I got back home late, my parents knew whathappened, they said to me: “It doesn’t matter, my child.Remember we’ll be always beside you when you needhelp. We believe you can be better next time. Never giveup!” I was moved and made up my mind to work harderand harder.I feel happy. Whenever I am in trouble, I can feel myparents’ love. I want to be a good child for my parents.