高考英语作文观点对比类议论文
2006年陕西卷高考英语的书面表达。 暑假即将来临。你班同学讨论了假期计划，提出了 不同看法，请根据提示写一篇有关讨论的英语短文， 并谈谈你的看法。待在家中 花费少，舒适方便 不能亲身了解外界外出旅游 增长知识，开阔眼界 花费多，旅游不便注意：1、词数100左右； 2、短文必须包括表中所列要点，可根据内容分段 表述；3、可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 4、参考词汇：眼界—horizon或view。一、审题 研读题目说明，由题材入手确定 题材、体裁、时态和人称题材：观点说明 体裁：说明文 时态：一般现在时 人称：第一人称题材要点： 1.花费少，舒适方便 2.不能亲身了解外界 3.增长知识，开阔眼界 4.花费多，旅游不便树立文章构架，形成整体雏形三段式 开头：提出问题或者现象 主体：陈述不同的观点及其理由 结尾：说明自己观点提炼要点，连词成句，边句成篇， 注意过渡词和长短句结合检查修改，规范抄写。二、谋篇 树立文章构架，形成整体雏形三段式 开头：提出问题或者现象 主体：陈述不同的观点及其理由 结尾：说明自己观点 文章谋篇：①.提出问题,总述事件或情况 表示总述事件或情况 的套语：? 1. 副词+现在完成时的句子? Recently, our class has had a heated discussion about whether sb should do …? 最近，我们班同学就某人是否应该做 …进 行了激烈的讨论。? Last …, our class held a group discussion about whether sb should do …? 上个…，我们班就某人是否应该做…进行 了分组讨论。 表示总述事件或情况 的套语：? 2. 同学们对此看法不一。 ? Different students have / hold differentopinions / views about it. ? Opinions are divided here. ? Students take different attitudes on thisproblem. ? 同学们在这个问题上采取的态度各不相同。 文章谋篇：②.不同观点的对比 表达支持该观点的套语1? 主题句+理由 ? ①Most of them are in favor of the idea.They think that… ? 大多数人赞成该想法。他们认为 … ? ②People who are for it hold the idea that… ? 支持该想法的人所持观点是 … 表达反对该观点的套语2? 主题句+理由 ? 1. However, some of them hold a differentview. They believe that … ? 2. Some of them hold the oppositeopinions. They argue that … ? 3. However, some are against the idea. ? 4. But some people don’t think so. Theybelieve that … 3.不同观点之间的衔接? 表列举：for example、for instance、that is to say? 表补充：besides、in addition、moreover ? 表对比：on the one hand…on the other hand, inspite of, on the contrary.? 表原因：because of、thanks to、due to、owing to? 表结果：therefore、thus、as a result、so? 表结论：to conclude、in a word、in brief、to sum up? 表转折：however、nevertheless、yet 文章谋篇：③.说明自己的观点, 结束全文 过渡性词汇：and, besides, first firstly, second secondly, then, finally, as well as， besides ,also, in addition, moreover， meanwhile, at the same time, what’s worse , for one thing, for another, what’s more . . . 表达个人观点： 1, In my opinion/eyes, ... 2, In my point of view, ... 3, Personally , ... 4, As far as I am concerned, ... 5, In my opinion, everything has its advantages and disadvantages. 6, In my opinion, everything has its strengths and weakness. 7, Each coin has two sides. Personally speaking,... 最后事项1、注意选词 2、多用短句，慎用长句 3、巧用过渡词 4、注意使用“变通表达法” 5、熟练运用书写技巧 Homework? Write the following article by making use of what was learned in this lesson. 人们对于网上交友持不同的意见．请用英语写一篇学生网上教友的短文，介绍人们的不同观点，并表达自 己的观点．赞成的理由反对的理由１．广交朋友１．浪费时间２．可自由表达思想 ２．影响学习３．利于外语学习 ３．可能上当受骗关键词：make friends ,express feeling freely ,foreign studies, a waste of time, get cheated online.关键句子：Students should place their study ,health ,and safety before other things . The students of class 3 had a discussion about whether it is necessary to start learning English from childhood. Opinions are divided on this issue. Some of them think that English learning should start from childhood. As little boys and girls have a very good memory, they can learn a lot of English words by heart. This wilWl hhealtp’sthmeomrel,ay a solid foundation for their future English learning. But others do not agree. Young children have to learn Chinese pinyin at school. If they study Chinese pinyin and English at the same time, it will be very easy for them to mix them up. This will do a lot of harm not only toWthheaitr’sCwhionressee, learning but also to their future English learning. In short, the students have not arrived at any agreement yet.