2014年烟台中考英语作文范文根据图表写调查报告并谈毕业后的人生理想

One possible version:

Two months ago, Jiaodong Online made a survey on what junior Grade 4 students would do after graduation. Here is the result.

65% of us hope to be admitted to the senior schools. About 20% would like to learn useful skills at technical schools so as to get jobs easily after graduation. And 10% of the students will find jobs to make money to support their families. Only 5% are not quite sure about their aims. I think they should make it clear what to do next.

In my opinion, we teenagers should have a definite design for our future life. Different students have different aims and of course they may change with the time.

My dream is to be a doctor to serve the patients. So, I am determined to work hard at all my lessons so that I can enter Beijing Medical University. I’m ready for a hard but colorful senior school life.

书面表达评分标准：

1.本题总分为15分，按五个档次给分。

2.评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言表达的流畅、准确程度等确定其所属档次，然后以该档次要求来确定本档次得分。出现考生个人信息不得分。

3.作文词数不少于100，否则扣1分。

4.书写不规范，卷面不整洁，扣1分。

5.各档次的给分范围和要求：

第一档（14 15分）：要点全面，能正确表述自己的观点，行文流畅，无语法和词汇错误。

第二档（11 13分）：能写出绝大部分要点，行文基本流畅，有少量语法和词汇错误。

第三档（8 10分）：写出大部分要点，行文尚通顺，有一些语法和词汇错误。

第四档（5 7分）：只写出部分要点，语言不通顺，有很多语法和词汇错误。

第五档（0 4分）：基本上没有实际内容，语法及拼写错误太多，不知所云。