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【考点】R1：提纲类；S4：应用文．

【分析】本文是应用文，根据所给要点给笔友Peter写一封信，告知他你叔叔李明将去他所在城市开会，带去他想要的那幅中国画，同时询问他是否可以接机，主要要点：李明：高个子，戴眼镜；航班号：CA985；到达：8月6日上午11:30．属提纲作文．在写作时人称以第一和第三人称为主．时态以一般现在时为主．重要短语：do sb a favor（帮某人个忙…），in advance （提前），look forward to doing（期望做…），ask sb to do （教某人做某事），write to sb （写信给…），asked for sth（要求…），the first visit to sp （第一次到…的拜访）．

【解答】

Dear Peter,

How are you doing? I’m writing to tell you that my uncle Li Ming is going to your city for a conference, and I’ve asked him to bring you the Chinese painting you’ve asked for before.【高分句型】（告知李明将去所在地并携带所需的画）

Also, I’d like you to do me a favor. Would you please meet my uncle at the airport and take him to his hotel since this is the first visit to the U.S.?【高分句型】Thank you in advance!（希望能接机）

His flight number is CA985, and it will arrive at 11:30 am, August 6. My uncle is tall and he is wearing glasses. And he will be in blue jacket.（具体接机信息和个人特征）

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型．