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打破托福写作尴尬——突破口!

2020-11-29 01:20:01
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托福写作业是一个比较怕尴尬的问题,尴尬在无头绪,开不了头,这时的考生就最容易钻牛角尖,这是在托福写作考试中最忌讳的。

雅托英语小编今天就带你打破这类尴尬,轻松完成托福写作,一起来看看吧!

托福写作突破

熟悉可能涉及的话题,可用official guide提供的185个topics,或去下载题库,然后反复阅读题目。185个topics从托福独立写作模式上分可分为——解释现象类,如解释一下为什么现代人的寿命比以前的长;对立观点类,给出两个对立的事物或者一个事物对立的两个方面,要求考生支持一方并进行说明,或给出两个对立事物或一个事物对立的两个方面,要求考生说明二者为什么不同或比较它们的优缺点,并给出理由。比如:

Some people like different friends. Other likes similar friends. Compare the advantages of these two kinds of friends. Which kind of friend do you prefer? Explain why

185个topics从内容上可分为:学习类(如自学还是跟老师学,学广还是学精)、工作类(如在大公司还是小公司)、电视电影类(如电视电影疏远了家人的情感,你是否同意)、生活类(如食品烹饪便捷是否提高生活质量,如喜欢在家里吃饭还是在餐厅吃饭)、消费类(如花在娱乐上,还是事业上)、古老建筑类(如是否应该保留老建筑)、环境类(如政府投入环保的力度是否应该大于投入经济发展的力度)、性格类(如聪明的朋友比幽默的朋友重要,你是否同意)、成功类(如成功的衡量标准是金钱和荣耀,你的看法如何)。

熟悉了写作题目之后,就要准备自己的答案资源库了。自己的资源库要包括:同一类题目的通用观点,有针对性的例证(不一定都要背名人典故,可以从自身取材,自给自足)。这些内容都是要自己去深思,需要有人点拨,才能形成一个清晰的构架和写作流程的。我的习惯就是羊毛出在羊身上,来源于彼,还原于彼。

线性思维,总——分——总,在新托福独立写作中,用这总分总种思维最容易获得高分,所以你要在平时的练习中一定要注意写作的结构。托福作文应该写成三个层次,也就是我们确立了中心思想后应该找到三条理由来支持。托福作文五段论:第一段为中心思想段;二、三、四段为支持段落;最后一段为总结段落。其实这个东西并不是绝对的,有自己的思想内容来决定,因此八股文的形式还是要隐晦些。

模仿几个高分句,点缀其中,添彩即可。模仿的句子来源,可以是阅读中的复杂句式,先分析长句子的语义功能:它在文章中起了什么作用,是总结,是过渡,是举例,还是因果?那么我在用到总结的语句时,是不是能偷天换日地用上这样的句式?用上几次之后,这些句子就会变得简单熟悉了。

提分写作突破

而在写作中,如何打破开头的尴尬呢?往下看,小编特意给打击举了一些例子:

1.According to the first graph, it can be seen that ______________, it can also be concluded from it that ______________.

2.Nowadays there is a growing concern over ______________. Many people like ______________, while others are inclined to ______________.

3. ______________, just like many other things, are preferred by ______________. While being attacked by the idea that ______________, some people consider ______________. They point that ______________.

4.Man is now facing a big problem-______________, which is becoming more and more serious. First, ______________ second, ______________.

5.One of our ancient philosophers said, ______________. Chinese people have always been holding this idea to be one of their standards of morality.

6.______________ is now______________, and at the same time ______________. These two factors have caused ______________. Then what shall we do to solve ______________ in the face of such a situation.

这只是打个比方,可以用相关内容组合,雅托英语小编给大家奉上完整的开头技巧:

1.摆出对比,Some people think that earlier-p food is such a waste of human resource; they can provide food completely on their own. However, in my opinion, earlier-p food could bring us lots of benefit and improve the way of people’s lives.

2. 背景知识,With fast development of techniques, more and more ‘fast’ ‘earlier’ sets have been formed, such as earlier-p food. Earlier-p food has been launched on the market for several years. There is a public debate about whether the earlier-p food improve the way people live. With every aspect taken into consideration, I believe that earlier-p food do improve people’s way live.

3.个例深入,n a hot summer noon, I went off my study, and had no choice but to go to the food market. With sweat on face, I went into the kitchen and wash vegetables and meat which have just been purchased. I was peeling the flat piece of potatoes, cutting cabbage into pieces, putting them together, and then cooking. It took me nearly one and a half hour to make 4 dishes, because some of my friends would come and have a lunch. If you do not have such experience, you would never know how convenient the easier-prepared foods are!

4.排比反问,ave you ever been worry about three meals whole day? Have you ever washed the vegetables and meat? Have you ever had to prepare the meal even so tired? If you have never such experiences, you would never know the improvement of people’ s way live on account of easier-prepared food.

这些开头都是根据这个问题来的:Does easier-prepared food improve the way people live?(更方便的食物能改善人们的生活方式吗?)

怎么样,大家有没有学到什么呢?

以上就是雅托英语小编给大家给大家奉上的策略,望对大家有所帮助,有什么问题欢迎来小编讨论哦!

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