留言条或书信的英语作文
有关留言条或书信的英语作文
留言条 Note
一、留言条
假设你是李华，星期天你要和你的同班同学李明一起去敬老院参加义务劳动，你去找他，但他没有在家 ，你给他留言说明要求，内容如下：
(1)9：30在学校门口集合;
(2)带劳动工具(洗衣粉、理发工具、除草工具等);
(3)自带午饭，骑自行车前往。
注意：
(1)词数100左右;(2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Li Ming，
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Li Hua
【猜题理由】写作题应该是学生较为熟悉的、身边的与他们生活、学习密切相关的话题。因为高考有一定的连续性，2010年有些省份仍可能采用应用文进行考查。
【构思点拨】本题属于提纲式要点作文，要求学生就所给内容写一张留言条，是学生比较熟悉的题材，体现了英语学习应该注意实用性，生活化的原则。应注意下面几点： (1)注意人称，应该用第一人称的形式给同学李明(第二人称)写便条：(2)注意时态的正确使用：从试题的内容上可以看出在表达要点上应用将来时;(3)注意恰当使用逻辑词语，是各个要点间逻辑连贯，行文通顺。提纲类书面表达不是简单的逐条翻译，而是将所给的几个要点合理的组成比较通顺的语句，因此要仔细组织语言，合理安排结构。在语言方面，要特别注意简洁明了，开门见山。
【参考范文】
Dear Li Ming,
This Sunday we'll go to the nursing home and do some voluntary labor. You were out, when I dropped in on you. Therefore, I had to leave a message to you. According to what monitor said, we'll meet at the gate of our school at 9:30 tomorrow morning and start out together by bike. So you should take your bike and don't forget to take some washing powder, barber tools and weeding tools so that we can help them with washing clothes, cutting their hair and get rid of some weed in the garden. At last, you should remember to take some food for lunch because we'll stay there for chatting with them at noon. If you come back, you'll phone me at once.
Li Hua
亲爱的李明，
本星期日我们将去养老院做一些自愿的劳动。当我在你的时候，你是我的。因此，我得给你留个口信。据班长说，我们会在我们学校门口在明天上午9:30开始一起骑自行车。所以你应该把你的自行车，不要忘记带上一些洗衣粉，理发工具和除草的工具使我们可以帮他们洗衣服，剪头发，除去花园里的杂草。最后，你应该记得带些吃的午餐，因为我们会在中午和他们聊天。如果你回来，你会打电话给我。
李华
中考英语满分作文：给汶川孩子们的一封信 A Letter to the Children in Wenchuan
2008年5月12日，四川汶川发生了特大地震，数十万人伤亡，数百万人失去了家园，数万孩子失去了校园。在此危难之时，全国人民众志成城，抗震救灾，向灾区人民伸出了援助之手。假设你叫李伟（Li Wei），请你从学生的角度，以 A Letter to the Children in Wenchuan 为题，给灾区的孩子写一封英文短信，以表达你的同情、关心、支持与鼓励，让他们尽快从地震的阴霾中走出来。
要点提示：同情 关心 支持 鼓励 祝愿
提示性词语：earthquake, kill, wound（致伤）, relatives, destroy, lonely, homeland, loveliest, whole-heartedly(全心全意地)，donate, overcome (克服), confidence, firm will (坚定的意志)，rebuild(重建) , pocket money (零花钱)
注意：（1）请尽可能使用所给的提示性词语，但写作不受所给词语的顺序限制.
（2）句式工整，书写规范，语句条理性强，注意标点符号。词数：80个左右。
参考作文：
A Letter to the Children in Wenchuan
Dear little friends,
May12,2008 was the most terrible day for you, for me and for all the Chinese .The great earthquake killed and wounded your relatives, your teachers and your classmates, and destroyed your houses and schools badly. You felt very sad and our hearts were also broken deeply. However, you are not lonely. The loveliest people, such as the leaders, soldiers, doctors and volunteers, immediately arrived and helped you whole-heartedly. The people all over China are donating money, things or even their blood. I've also donated all my pocket money.
All these days I've been collecting the information from Wenchuan. Sometimes tears on my face while watching, listening or reading.
China is a big family. We are all your brothers and sisters. We will do everything to help you rebuild your homeland and make you be out of the endless pains. We are all together with you for ever. I believe you can overcome the difficulties with your confidence and the firm will. Please accept my heartfelt wishes: You'll be fine in the future.
Best wishes to you all !
Yours,
Li Wei
给汶川孩子们的一封信亲爱的小朋友们，2008年5月12日你是最可怕的一天，我和所有的中国人。大地震中死亡和受伤的亲人，你的老师和同学，并摧毁了你的房屋和学校严重。你觉得很伤心，我们的心也碎深深。然而，你并不孤独。最可爱的人，如领导，军人，医生和志愿者，立即赶到，真心实意地帮助你。所有的中国人都捐了钱，事情甚至他们的血。我也捐出了我所有的零花钱。这些天我一直从汶川收集的信息。有时候，眼泪在我的脸上看，听力或阅读。中国是一个大家庭。我们都是你的兄弟姐妹。我们将尽一切努力帮助你重建你的家园，让你摆脱无尽的痛苦。我们都和你在一起永远。我相信你能克服你的信心和公司的困难。请接受我衷心的祝福：你将来会被罚款。最好的祝福给你！真诚的祝福，李伟
a letter to a manager 求职信
Dear manager,
I will graduate from Beijing No.1 Middle School in July. I have studied English for six years. I’m interested in English very much. I am especially good at spoken English and typing, and my typing speed is 100 words a minute.
I can operate the personal computer and make programs for it. I can get information from the Internet and send information on business through it. If I’m accepted, I’ll work hard, and be a good worker.
Yours sincerely，
Li Lei
亲爱的经理,
我将于7月毕业于北京第一中学。我学英语已经六年了。我对英语非常感兴趣。我尤其擅长口语和打字,我的打字速度是每分钟100个单词。
我可以操作个人电脑和编程序。我可以从网上获得信息和发送信息业务。如果我求职成功了,我会努力工作,是一个好工人。
你真诚的,
李雷
高考英语满分作文及名师评析 写信 Letter
高考英语满分作文
【试题回放】
假定你是李华，正是英国牛津参加短期语言培训，计划星期天去伦敦旅游。互联网上一则广告引起了你的注意，但一些具体信息不明确(箭头所指内容)。请给该旅行社发一封电子邮件，询问有关情况。
注意：1.词数100左右，信的格式已为你写好。
2.可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3.参考词汇：牛津——Oxford 费用——fee
Dear Sir/Madame,
I’m writing for more information about the day tour to London.
As a student at Oxford University, I’d like to know if you have any special price for students. As for the money you charge, does it cover the entrance fees for visiting the places listed? What about lunch? Is it included? Or do I need to bring along my own food?
How long will the tour last? Since I need to prepare my lessons for the nest day, I’d like to know the time to return. Besides, is there any time for shopping? I really want to have a look at the big stores in London.
Yours,
Li Hua
尊敬的先生/女士，
我写的更多的信息，在伦敦的一日游。
作为牛津大学的一名学生，我想知道你是否对学生有特殊的价格。至于你所收取的钱，它是否包括了所列地方的入场费？午饭怎么样？是否包括？还是我需要带上我自己的食物？
巡演将持续多久？因为我需要准备好我的功课，我想知道的时间，返回。再说，还有没有时间去购物？我真的很想看看伦敦的大商店。
你的，
李华
[名师点评]
本文是根据画面的提示来写一封电子邮件。作者在文章中首先把握了全部的要点，叙述较为完整;其次，作者运用一些过渡句和衔接词将文章串联，意思连贯。文章中采用了第一人称和一般现在时，这是值得肯定的地方。
【试题回放】假设你是李华，最近国内一家英文报纸正在讨论北京动物园是否应迁出市区。以下是你所在班级讨论的情况。请你给该报写一封信，反映讨论结果。
赞成迁出：反对迁出：
1.游客多，交通堵塞
2.郊区环境好1.建于1906年，中外闻名
2.搬迁易造成动物死亡
注意：1.词数100字左右，信的开头已为你写好。
2.可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3.参考词汇： 郊区—suburb
Dear Editor ,
Recently ,in our class there has been a heated discussion about whether the Beijing Zoo should be moved out of the city . Some of my classmates are in favor of the move .They say large crowds of tourists to the zoo will result in traffic jams .They also say that once moved ,animals will have more space and better living conditions in the suburbs .However ,other students are against the idea ,saying that the Beijing Zoo, built in 1906 ,has a history of 100 years ,and is well –known at home and abroad .So it should remain where it is .What’s more ,moving may cause the death of some animals .To move or not ,this is a big decision which has to be made by people in Beijing.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
亲爱的编辑，
最近，在我们班上，有一个激烈的讨论，北京动物园是否应该搬出城市。一些同学都赞成的`举动。他们说大量的游客到动物园将导致交通堵塞。他们还说，曾经的感动，动物将有更大的空间和更好的生活条件在郊区。然而，其他学生都反对这个主意，说的北京动物园，建于1906年，有100多年的历史，，好–已知在国内和国外。所以它应该保持，它是。什么是更多，移动可能会造成一些动物的死亡。移动或不，这是一个大的决定是由北京人。
你真正的，
李华
[名师点评]
这篇文章写得还是比较精彩的。要点表达得完整而准确，清楚展示了主题。先提出了文章的主题，进而列出了赞成的观点及其相关的理由，同时在其后又给出了反面的观点，论据十分充足。文章结构严谨，前后连贯。
【试题回放】
第一节情景作文(20分)
美国中学生jeff将要来你所在的红星中学学习中文，经协商安排住在你家。假设你是李华，请给Jeff写一封信，按照下图顺序介绍他来中国后的生活安排。
注意：1. 信的开头已为你写好。
2.词数不少于60。
Dear Jeff,
I’m Hua from Beijing Hongxing Middle School. I’m very happy to learn that you’re going to stay with my family while you’re in Beijing.
While you are here, we’ll provide you with a room of your own with a bed, a desk, a couple of chairs and a TV. You’ll also have your own bathroom. Our school is quite close to our home, so we could go to school together by bike. At noon we’ll eat at the school dining hall. I’m sure you’ll like the delicious Chinese food there, and enjoy talking with friends over lunch. Classes in our school usually finish at 4 in the afternoon. You can then join other students in playing ball games or swimming. It’ll be a lot of fun.
If you have any questions or requests, please let me know. We’ll try our best to make your stay here in Beijing a pleasant experience.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
亲爱的杰夫，
我华从北京红星中学。我很高兴得知你在北京的时候会和我的家人在一起。
当你在这里，我们会为你提供一个你自己的房间，一张床，一张桌子，几把椅子和一台电视机。你也有自己的浴室。我们学校离我们家很近，所以我们可以骑自行车去上学。中午我们在学校食堂吃饭。我敢肯定你会喜欢那里的美味的中国菜，喜欢和朋友一起吃午饭。我们学校的课程通常在下午4点完成。你可以和其他同学一起玩球类或游泳。这将是一个很大的乐趣。
如果您有任何问题或要求，请让我知道。我们将尽我们最大的努力，使您在这里的逗留在北京愉快的体验。
最美好的祝愿，
李华
[名师点评]
这篇文章的特点还是比较清晰的，第一，作者根据图画将文章的要点概括完整，内容充实而丰富，结构紧凑，有层次感;第二，本文没有采用华丽的辞藻，但用词十分恰当，段落过渡自然，令人耳目一新。
A Letter to Lily 给莉莉的信
作文一：
Dear Lily,
How are you? You have known Beijing will be the host city of the 2008 Olympic Games, haven' t you? Everyone in Beijing is very excited. What should we do for the 2008 Olympic Games?
We are going to plant some trees in the West Lake Park this Saturday in order to make Beijing more beautiful.
We are very happy to do something for Beijing and the Olympic Games.
By the way I have two tickets for tomorrow' s film. Will you join me? Please phone me if you will.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Xiang
亲爱的莉莉：
你好! 你已经知道北京即将举办2008年的奥运会的消息了，是吗?北京人都很兴奋。我们该为2008年的奥运会做点儿什么呢?
为了把北京打扮得更美丽，我们星期六打算去西湖公园种树。我们很高兴能为北京，能为奥运会做些事。
顺便说一下，我有两张明天的电影票，你是否愿意一起去?如果愿意，请给我打电话。
祝好!
你的朋友 李响
作文二：
Dear Lily,
How are you getting on recently? Maybe you have known the good news, but I still want to tell you that Beijing has been the host city of the 2008 Olympic Games. We were so excited that we jumped up. We laughed and laughed. We talked with everyone,even with strangers. We all want to do something for the 2008 Olympic Games.
In order to make Beijing more beautiful, we are going to plant some trees in the West Lake this Saturday. We are happy to have a chance to show our hearts.
By the way, would you like to see a film with me tomorrow?A new film is on at the Capital Cinema. If you will, please call me between 6:00 and 9:00 in the evening. OK?
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Xia
亲爱的莉莉：
近来可好?也许你已经知道了，但是我还是要告诉你北京已经成为2008年的奥运会主办城市了。我们激动地都跳起采了。我们笑啊，笑啊。我们和每个人，甚至是陌生人说啊，说啊。我们都想为奥运会做点儿事。
为了使北京变得更漂亮，我们这个星期六要去西湖公园种树。我们很高兴有这个机会表示我们的心意。
顺便问一下，明天你愿不愿意和我一起去看电影?首都电影院在上演一部新片。如果愿意，请在晚上六点至九点给我打电话，好吗?
你的朋友 李响
中考英语作文范文（书信）
Dear David,
I'm glad you'll come to Beijing to learn Chinese. Chinese is very useful, and many foreigners are learning it now. It's difficult for you because it's quite different from English. You have to remember as many Chinese words as possible. It's also important to do some reading and writing. You can watch TV and listen to the radio to practise your listening. Do your best to talk with people in Chinese. You can learn Chinese not only from books but also from people around you. If you have any questions, please ask me. I'm sure you'll learn Chinese well.
Hope to see you soon in Beijing.
Yours,
Wang Ming
亲爱的戴维，
I'm glad you'll come to Beijing to learn Chinese. Chinese is very useful, and many foreigners are learning it now. It's difficult for you because it's quite different from English. You have to remember as many Chinese words as possible. It's also important to do some reading and writing. You can watch TV and listen to the radio to practise your listening. Do your best to talk with people in Chinese. You can learn Chinese not only from books but also from people around you. If you have any questions, please ask me. I'm sure you'll learn Chinese well.
我很高兴你会来北京学习中文。中国是非常有用的，许多外国人都在学习。对你很难，因为它和英语完全不同。你必须记住尽可能多的中国话。同样重要的是做一些阅读和写作。你可以看电视，听广播练习你的听力。你最好跟人在中国。你可以从书本中学习汉语不但而且从你周围的人。如果你有任何问题，请告诉我。我相信你会学好中文。
Hope to see you soon in Beijing.
希望早日在北京见到你。
Yours,
真诚的，
Wang Ming
王明
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