深度赏析：考研英语小作文感谢信范例解析

“考研英语小作文感谢信范文赏析二”是对一篇考研英语小作文感谢信范文的具体分析和赏析。本文将从感谢信的格式、语言、内容等方面展开分析，通过对范文的细致解读，帮助读者更好地理解感谢信的写作技巧和注意事项。此篇赏析将突出范文的优点，同时指出可借鉴之处，旨在帮助考生提升英语写作水平，为考研英语写作打下良好基础。

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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Eleven

I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for your encouragement to me. If it had not been for your assistance in my Olympic Game in Maths. I fear that I would have been give it up early.

Every one agrees that it was you who encouraged me to persist on the game all the time and always helped me make a lot of preparations for the game, so I had the confidence in myself and won the game at last. Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

考研英语作文批改点评如下：

Dear Eleven，

I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for your encouragement to me. If it had not been for your assistance in my (加上study of)Olympic Game in Maths(奥数是Mathematic Olympiad ). I fear that I would have been give(改为giving) it up early.

Every one agrees that it was you who encouraged me to persist on the game all the time and always helped me make a lot of preparations for the game, so I had the confidence in myself and won the game at last. Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

8分

同学你好，这篇小作文整体来讲写的不错。建议你如果遇到某些不确定但又不是非常重要的专有名词，可以改为其他有把握的词，例如本篇作文中提到的奥数，完全可以改为其他的比赛。