天津市2019高考英语满分作文
天津市 2019 高考英语满分作文试题回顾 假设你是晨光中学的李津,英国友好校将派教师来你校参加为期一周的暑期交流活动.活动期间,英方教师 Chris 将做一个有关西方艺 术的讲座.现就讲座内容征求你校学生的意见.请根据以下提示给 Chris 写一封电子邮件: (1)你喜欢的讲座话题(从音乐、美术、舞蹈中任选其一); (2)选择该话题的原因及关于该话题你感兴趣的内容; (3)希望从中有何收获. 注意: (1)词数不少于 100; (2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯; (3)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数. Dear Chris, Im Li Jin, a student at Chenguang High School. Thank you for your time.Yours, Li Jin分析高分句型一:I am interested in all kinds of music, among which Jazz is my favorite. 译文:我对各种音乐都感兴趣,其中爵士乐是我最喜欢的. 分析:among which 引导非限制性定语从句. 高分句型二:I would appreciate it if you can add some sessions ofenjoying jazz. 译文:如果你能增加一些享受爵士乐的课程,我会很感激的. 分析:固定句型 appreciate it if… 解答Dear Chris, Im Li Jin, a student at Chenguang High School.I got the news that your school will send teachers to my school for a week-long summer exchange. During the activity, you will give a lecture on Western art. You want to seek for advice on what topic the lecture will be about.(写信目的) From my personal note, music is my priority.(你喜欢的讲座话题) I am interested in all kinds of music, among which Jazz is my favorite.高分句型一I want to know about the history of jazz, and some famous jazz singers.(选择该话题的原因及关于该话题你感兴 趣的内容) I would appreciate it if you can add some sessions of enjoying jazz. 高分句型二(希望从中有何收获) Thank you for your time.Yours, Li Jin点评这是一篇提纲类作文,我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要 点表达出来. 动笔前,一定要认真分析要点,理解要点要表达的 含义,不能遗漏要点,跑题偏题.本作文中给出的要点比较具体, 故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高 级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次.特别注意在选择句式时要 赋予变化.平时除了加强词汇积累,写作联系以外,还可以适当记 忆一些类似的范文,这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果.