2019年湖北省襄阳市中考英语满分作文
2019 年湖北省襄阳市中考英语满分作文据了解,为了进一步引导中学生积极参加体育锻炼,提高身体素质,襄阳市教育主管部门正在研究制定有关 "中考"体育考试的改革方案( the plan),考虑在原有项目的基础上增加篮球、 排球或足球, 总分(the score)也由 30 分增加至 50 分.作为一名参加过体育 "中考 "的学生,你对这样的改革持什么样的态度.请根据写作要点提示,用英语写一篇短文表述你的观点.1.要点提示:(l)观点明确(要么赞成,要么反对) :(2)理由充分(可针对增加考试的项目和调整的分值,也可只选其一.限三条理由);(3)给出建议(围绕你的观点提出一条合理化建议) .2.注意事项:(l)字数: 90 词左右;(2)行文应连贯流畅; (3)文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称. 分析高分句型一:Its said that basketball ,volleyball and soccer will be added to the test,此句用上了 Its said that??结构,意为 "据说?? ",同时,用上了被动语态 be added,意为 "被添加,被增加 ",这句话意为 "据说篮球、排球和足球增加到了考试中 "高分句型二: So here come the changes ,这句话在结构上, 用到了倒装句式,其主语为 the changes意为"那些变化 ",这句话意为 "所以那些变化就到来了"解答 My Attitude on the Changes of Physical ExaminationsHello,everyone,Im Mike .Recently,I heard that there might be some changes about the physical examination . Its said that basketball ,volleyball and soccer will be added to the test 高分句型一,and the score will rise from 30 points to 50 points . As a student who has taken the physical test in senior high school entrance examination ,I have some opinions.(开篇点题,说明观点)First of all ,I totally agree with the changes. nowadays,more and more students at school just ask for grades but forget the impotance of heal ,they study day and night and even sleep less than eight hours a day.Then they become weak in sports ,dont know how to play balls.Actually,some of them nearly get into studying machines .So here come the changes 高分句型二,the physical examination will force them to play basketball,soccer or any other balls,but in a word,they start exercising!Its a good phenomenon .(观点一)On the other hand,the purpose of education is to provide the world with useful people ,not useless bookworms ,so once they take the sports seriously ,they will practise as hard as they spend time on papers.Therefore,they become strong ,wiser and able to fight for their careers .The society can be developed,too.(观点二)At the same time,I have a suggestion.I advise the government to carry on the plan sternly to make sure it can improve students poor physical situations.(收尾呼应,提出建议. )点评 在解答写作这类试题时,要根据短文的中心思想考虑如何开头、展开和结尾,设想几个承上启下的连词,将主要句型、关键词语草草记下,形成提纲,写时切忌结构分散,废话连篇,严重跑题.