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2008年奥运会刚刚落幕，一家英文报刊在其网站上征集奥运会后如何综合利用体育场馆的建议。假设你叫李华，是该报的一名读者，请给该报编辑部写一封信，谈谈你的建议和理由．内容包括：年奥运会刚刚落幕，一家英文报刊在其网站上征集奥运会后如何综合利用体育场馆的建议。假设你叫李华，是该报的一名读者，请给该报编辑部写一封信，谈谈你的建议和理由．内容包括： １．向公众开放，用于健身 ２．租给体育公司，创造经济效益 ３ ３ ． 开辟成旅游景点 ， 吸引游客 ． ４． Dear editor, I am Li Hua, a reader of your paper. 内容语法框架内容语法框架 组织结构要点全，拓展有度，有效连接词，作文结构紧凑 流畅准确，复杂语法结构，高级词汇，多种句型准确，复杂语法结构，高级词汇，多种句型思想凑 ； 流畅开放能引起读者的共鸣, 灵魂1. 单词拼写或用错：Give you some advise I just provide you my own suggests.advicesuggestionThey can attact visitors.suggestionattract2. 时态语态问题We may given it to the PE company.We may give it to the PE company..3. 主谓一致问题The sport stadiums is very great and is highly soken of bthe foreiners. p y gThe sport stadiums are very great and are highly spoken of by the foreigners.4. 逐字翻译问题The stadiums can open to people for do exercise use.The stadiums can be opened to people for doing exercises.5. 词性混淆问题It can creative money..It can create/bring in money.Many people can use them to strong our body.Many people can use them to strengthen our body.6. 介词短语的运用问题I am writing to make some advice for how to make full use of the sports stadium.I am writing to make some advice on how to make full use of the sports stadium. 7. 句子结构不完整Only make full use of them does it make sense .Only by making full use of them does it make sense The 29th Olympic Games which hosted in Beijing were held successfully.The 29th Olympic Games which were hosted inBeijing were held successfully.1. 审题2. 列提纲/ 要点体裁时态结构要求体裁时态结构要求字数内容...