高三英语作文公开课 如何使你的作文颜值与才华齐飞

作文五档：（ 从教师阅卷 印象角度 划分）?? 漂漂亮亮 （21 25分）?? 有模有样 （16 20分）?? 马马虎虎 （11 15分）?? 稀里糊涂 （6 10分）?? 一塌糊涂 （0 5分）林 唐美林 22.5倩 黄佳倩 21高 颜值 的文章能够评委老师留下好印象，先声夺人。但是 好文章 却不仅限于只有 颜值 ， .才华词汇 句型衔接过渡词汇 句型衔接过渡回顾作文题目假设你是李华，你的美国笔友Andy 一 一 ， 即将到你所在的中学做 年的交换生 ，想提前了解一些情况，故向你求助。请给他写一封回信，提供有关想提前了解一些情况，故向你求助。请给他写一封回信，提供有关 天气 、当地饮食习惯 、 学校生活 方面的信息。高级表达过渡词动名词做主语高级表达过渡词动名词做主语非限制性定语从句谚语宾语从句非限制性定语从句谚语宾语从句林 唐美林 22.5It goes without saying that our classmate is extremely warm hearted and open minded.I fi l b li th t ill h陈梅I firmly believe that you will have a colorful and meaningful school life here.And our school often holdactivities to enrich our school life, so we have a meaningful and colorful school life. To promote our friendship, I will keep a good relationship with you I陈小露keep a good relationship with you. I believe you can fit in our school life 怎样能使我们的文章颜值与才华齐飞？Tips 1 ：颜值★ 1、分段要合理。绝大多数高考范文以及高分作文都是分为2~3段的，也有少数是4 5段的。★ 2、书写要美观。书写要符合英文书写习惯，字母的大小，字母之间的距离要匀称，尽量减少涂改、增补的现象。Tips 2 ：词汇1、高级词汇代替低级词汇chance opportunity ; so thereforeimportant vital 可参考三维设计P136页 页2、短语代替单个单词important be of great importance should be supposed to help sb do sb a favorvisit pay a visit toTips 3 ：句型定语从句 宾语从句 名词性从句强调句 With 的复合结构非谓语动词被动句强调句 With 的复合结构常用谚语 省略句倒装句 .There is no doubt that...It goes without saying that 毫无疑问, More and more students choose to t d b d固定句型：同位语从句There is no doubt that/ It goes without saying that more and more students choose to study abroad.study abroad. More attention should be given to固定句型：被动句More attention should be given to Measures should be taken to More attention should be given to teaching and learning English. Measures should be taken to protect our mother river.It is believed that... It is universally acknowledged that.....人们认为H lth i i t t th lth固定句型：主语从句It is universally acknowledged thathealth is more important than wealth.Health is more important than wealth.Only y in this way can sb do .Only by doing... can sb do....只有通过这种方式我们才能....O l i hi l hi bl固定句型：倒装句Only in this way can you solve this problem.Only by taking exercise can e we keep healthy.If I were you, I would If I were you, I would take part in moreactivities.固定句型：虚拟语气It is high time that sb did sth/should do sthIt is high time that we paid/ should paymore attention to our environment 1 、It is/was + 被强调部分+that/who+ 其余成分固定句型：强调句2 、It is/was not until that 3 、用do 来强调动词Our teacher always help us when we are in I believe you can do it.I do believe you can do it.y ptrouble. It is our teacher that always help us when we are in trouble. 我认为 ......I am convinced that .As far as I am concerned, ..From my point of view, ..From where I stand, 谚语格言名言1 、A friend in need is a friend indeed2 、Where there is a will, there is a way.3 、When in Roam, do as a Romans do.4 、Practice makes perfect.5 、No pains, no gains. 6 、Failure is the mother of success.7 、Roam was not build in a day.8 、Every coin has two sides. As an old saying goes, firstly, secondly, thirdly, then, finally, in the end, what s more, moreover,more importantly, besides， ， in additionone on hand, on the other hand， ， on the Tips 4 ：衔接过渡,contrary， ， therefore ，as a result， ， in other words ，as you know, as we all know, generally speaking, as a matter of factto tell you the truth