三 英语写作六要素.doc

一、审题要清看到考题后，先不要急于动笔，要仔细看清题目要求的内容。在自己的头脑中构思出一个框架或画面，确定短文的中心思想，不要匆匆下笔，看懂题意，根据提供的资料和信息来审题。审题要审格式、体裁、人物关系、故事情节、主体时态、活动时间、地点等。二、要点明确要点是给分的一个重要因素。为了防止写作过程中遗漏要点，同学们要充分发挥自己的观察力，把情景中给出的各个要点逐一罗列出。三、列出提纲为写作做好准备。根据文章要点短文的中心思想将主要句型、关键词语记下，形成提纲。四、写顺全文写短文时要做到五个方面：1.避免使用汉语式英语，尽量使用自己熟悉的句型。2.多用简单句型，记事、写人一般都不需要复杂的句型。可适当多使用陈述句、一般疑问句、祈使句和感叹句。不用或少用非谓语或独立主格结构等较复杂的句型。3.注意语法、句法知识的灵活运用。语态、时态要准确无误；主谓语要一致，主语的人称和数要和谓语一致；注意冠词用法，例如：It takes Tom half an hour to go to school by bus.中的an不能写成a；注意拼写，例如：fourteen，forty，ninth等不要写成forteen，fourty，nineth等；注意标点符号和大小写。4.描写人物时，要生动具体，可以选择使用下列词汇，例如：外形：tall，short，fat，thin，strong，weak，pretty等；颜色：red,yel low，blue，white，green，brown，black等；心情：glad，happy，sad，excited，anxious，interest ed等；情感：love，like，hate，feel，laugh，cry，smile，shout等。5.上下文要连贯。同学们应把写好的句子，根据故事情节，事情发生的先后次序时间或空间，使用一些表示并列、递进等过渡词进行加工整理，使文章连贯、自然、流畅。同学们应注意下面过渡的用法：并列关系：and,as well as,or…；转折关系：but,yet,how ever…；时间关系：when,while,after,before,then,after that…；因果关系：so，there fore，asaresult…；目的：in order to，in order that，so as to,so that…；列举：for example,such as…；总结性：in general,in all,in aword,generally speaking…五、没有病句中考作文时，由于时间紧、内容多，同学们出错在所难免。因此，改错这一环节必不可少。中考作文评卷是根据要点、语言准确性、上下文的连贯性来给分，根据错误多少来扣分。因此中考时花几分钟时间用来检查错误显得尤为重要。检查错误应从以下几个方面入手：1看字数是否达到要求，看有无遗漏要点。2看文体格式是否正确规范。3看有无语法或用词上的错误。4看单词拼写、字母大小写是否有错，标点符号有无遗漏或用错等等。5注意时态、语态、人称是否上下文一致。六、先打草稿考试中，书面表达应做到先打草稿，写完后多读几遍，检查是否有误，然后再抄到试卷上，注意字迹要工整，不涂、不画、不勾不抹，避免不必要的扣分。四英语作文样板1.最近，教育部启动了 阳光体育 运动，建议全国中小学生每天坚持锻炼一小时，让他们健康、快乐。此项活动受到了广大学生的欢迎。李华对所在学校学生参加活动的情况和反映做了一个调查。请你根据下面调查表的内容，帮他给学校写一篇报道。词数：80词左右。报道的开头和结尾已给出不计入总词数。Interviewees调查对象ActivitiesFeelingsReasons most studentsplay sportsinterestedhave lots of fun many studentsskip ropehappykeep healthy some studentstake awalkrelaxedenjoy fresh air afew studentsworriednot enough time to finish their homework The Sunshine Sports program is very popular in our school.Nearly all the students take part in it.Most students are interested in playing sports.They think they have lots of fun.Many students are happy with skipping rope.They believe it can keep them healthy.Some students relax while they are taking awalk.In this way they can enjoy fresh air.However,a few students are still worried that they may not have enough time to finish their homework.No matter what students think about the program,they all like the idea,which will make them happy and keep them fit at the same time.2.假如你是王欣，请根据以下信息写一封信给校长，推荐九年级一班学生刘建为电脑俱乐部主席。因为他有很多很好的个人品质：1爱好广泛如电脑、足球和篮球等；2聪明用功如合理安排时间、成绩好等；3热心助人，受同学们欢迎。480词左右。Dear Sir,I think Liu Jian in Class 1,Grade 9is the best person to be chairman of the Computer Club.He is not only good at computer,but also good at football and basketball.He is smart and always works hard and gets good grades.He knows how to use his time well to do things he likes.He is always ready to help others.We alllike him,and he is very popular among us.I will be thankful if you can think about my advice carefully and make Liu Jian chairman of the club.Best wishes,Yours,Wang Xin 3.今年6月份中考结束后，你Bruce将迎来一个较为轻松的暑假。请把你的计划写成书信寄给Tom。信件内容包含以下要点：1坚持每天一小时的体育锻炼；2与家人多交流，做些家务；3拜访几个老师与好友；4安排一趟3 5天的旅游。5词数不少于80。Dear Tom,My summer holiday is coming.I have made aplan for it.During the holiday,I want to go to visit some of my teachers and friends.In Grade Three,I was so busy that Ihad no time to talk with them.I will talk more with my family.I will try to do some housework.My parents work very hard.I should try my best to help them.I will have 3or more days trip.Fresh air and beautiful views will be good for my health.Of course,daily exercise is important,too.I want be stronger.How do you like my plan?Would you like to share your plan with me?Write me soon.Yours,Bruce 4.北京2008年奥运会志愿者招募活动已经开展，报名参加北京奥运会赛事的志愿者必须满足以下条件，请就此做一说明。词数：80 100。开头已经给出，不计算在内。1law法律；related activity相关活动；2出生于1990年6月30日前；3必须遵守中国法律；4能够为奥运会连续服务7天或以上；5能够使用中英文进行交流；6可以参加赛前的各项培训和相关活动。Voluteer wanted Do you want to be avoluteer for the Beijing Olypic Games?We are in great need of voluteers.If you want to apply for ajob,you must meet the following requirements.First,you must obey the laws of China.Second,you have to be born before June 30,1990 and in good health.Thirdly,you must be good at both Chinese and English so that people can understand you easily.One very important thing is that during the games you must work at least 7days or more.Finally you must take part in some of the pre games training and related activities.Are you interested?Come and join us.