英语作文写作笔记.doc
大作文段落分配154 （78） 440字80字40字 第一段 （第一句）Describe/depict描述画面（宏观总括） The picture above gives us a vivid description of ..two disabled people,此处不应详细描写 （第二句）just as（画面细节描述）（2） Just as we can see from the picture, （第三句）justgo（谚语举例，可省略） （第四句）aim at图片设计的目的点题 Obviously/Undoubtely, the picture aims at reminding /convincing us of 第二段微观方面宏观方面/个人社会/正面论证反面论证 阐述主题的重要性或深刻含义 （第一大句）主题句（引言铺垫） is extremely important to us, especially to..。 The implied meaning of the drawing can be interpreted in terms of 从方面mutual help and coopration. （第二大句）第一层意思12/ （第二大句）第一层意思13正面论证 As is known to us all,.. To begin with , （第三大句）第二层意思12/ （第三大句）第二层意思13反面论证 Beside,.. （第四大句）第三层意思12/ Last but not least,.. （第五大句）收尾再次强调主题词（1） As a result,is essential to bothand 第三段（采取措施、提倡主题）4 （第一句） all mentioned above,therefore,we can come to a conclusion that we should put great emphasis on主题 In my view ,some necessary measures must be taken to make people realize that主题 Therefore ,we should keep it in mind“名言” 第二句）行动上怎么做/（微观总结） First of all, For one thing,.. 第三句（意识怎么做）/（宏观总结） In addition, For another, 第四句号召或预测 Only in these ways ,can we build up a society full of harmony. Only by.,can ,and only in this way ,can 小作文致歉信段落分配2331 第一段 （第一句）自报家门（背景） I am Li Ming. . fromwho （第二句）写信目的（目的） Now ,I am writing .to目的for由于 第二段（描述事件过程） （第一句）介绍事件背景 During .., . （第二句）介绍事件发生过程 （第三句）略表歉意 I feel quite sorry for this. 第三段（解决办法） （第一句）办法一 （第二句）让步，办法二 第四段（诚挚歉意） Again，please forgive me for the convenience caused you. 写作范例 Dear sir. I am and I intend to because I learned from the newspaper that the children have been deprived of the right to背景 目的 原因 You need to make two factors into consideration when you are looking for such a candidate. on the one hand ,.on the other hand . the girl student with outstanding academic achievements will be preferred . （要求） I intend to carry out my plan as follows for one thing for another ,（行动） I am looking forward to .thank you in advance（致谢） 英语句法 句前状语前置定语（主语）后置定语状语（谓语）补语前置定语（宾语）后置定语 1） 主动 The price is increasing due to . 2） 主动宾 In order to ensure good health ,we should develop good living habits Enhancing the is ,in the long run, benefical to the stability of 3） 主动主补很少用 We are eager to turn our dreams into reality. 4） 主动间宾直宾 The social practice offers us multiple opportunities to apply what we have learn from books to the real practice Traveling abroad offers us a good chance to have a better understanding of the western cultures , which is benefical to the friendship between the and 5） 主动宾宾补 The extensive use of internet has made our daily life more convenient and efficient than ever before .especially in the fields of 经典句型 Were it left to me to make a choice between the two points , I would not hasitate for a moment to prefer the er. It is hard to imagine what our life would be klike without energy. We should launch a worldwide campaign to bring under control. 主题句特点不要太泛看，尽量规整，句子简洁，为下文做铺垫（数量词运用） 提纲列法只列关键词 各工作组要指定一名人员承担信息报送工作，负责搜集和整理本组及相关成员单位的各类信息，经组长审核把关后及时报综合组，每周至少报送一条工程进展信息，每季度报送工作总结。 展开阅读全文