英语作文班佳作欣赏

英语作文班佳作欣赏

篇一：C班-英语作文

书面表达提高训练

第一部分：北京高考情景作文：

第二部分：要点和细节（2015届海淀区高三期末英语作文）

假设你是红星中学高三（1）班的学生李华，请根据下面四幅图的先后顺序，为校刊“英语园地”写一篇短文，记述你上周日陪同英国朋友Tom 和Mary体验北京的主要过程。词数不少于80。

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Last Sunday was a great ______________ for me.

Two of my British friends traveled to Beijing. In order to let them experience Beijing’s traditional culture, I _______ them to walk around the old areas. The mild sunshine ___________the beginning of our journey. We arrived at NanLuoGu Lane. _____________ the coldness, both of them were ________ in the ancient buildings of Chinese features. After I ___________with them something about its culture, they were ___________ in it whi(来自:www.zaidian.cOm 书 业网)le __________ around.

We __________ our lunch at a traditional restaurant. So tasty were the taste of Chinese noodles that they we chose to play on the vast icy lake in the HouHai Park. As Tom was not that good at skating, I had to________my assistance to prevent him from _________________. We really had a good time. we called at some gift shops where they bought some paper cuts as souvenirs while enjoying some brilliant Chinese folk show.

______________ pride and excitement, we were on our way home.

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Last Sunday was a fine memory for me and my English friends Tom and Mary, for we________around old Beijing and _______________________ Chinese culture together.

we arrived at NanLuogu Alley, on the sides of which ________stores of Chinese features. Walking through the broad or narrow alleys, we __________within the air of Chinese culture, __________ the ancient brick we tasted Beijing Bean Sauce Noodles at a traditional restaurant, which Tom praised a lot with his ________________.

we strolled to the HouHai Park which is ____________ by various tourists. we went to shop some souvenirs along the street nearby. My friends loved Chinese paper cutting, thinking them not only beautiful but also full of happiness and meaning. The shopkeeper introduced the art___________ to them.

. The tour was really exciting and my friends were satisfied with the culture they experienced. What a pride I took!

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we headed for Nanluogu Xiang, a famous lane where varieties of snacks and handcrafts of traditional we had a taste of Fried Bean Sauce Noodles. So delicious was it that they couldn’t help praising with their thumbs up. we went to HouHai for skating. Mary was good at it while Tom almost couldn’t stand without my help, which _______ us some ____________________.

I brought my friends to the souvenir shop in the street, where we watched kite-making and paper-cutting show. So ________ on the beautiful paper cuts that each bought one piece to memorize our tour of Beijing traditional culture.

The day ______________ precious memories, a __________ and ____________ of Beijing’s beauty of her culture.

第三部分：框架结构和过渡连接训练(2014北京高考作文)

假设你是红星中学高三（1）班的学生李华，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，用校刊“英语园地”写一篇短文，

记述你和同学们向学校提建议，解决自行车存放问题的过程。

注意： 1. 词数不少于 60. 2. 短文的.开头已给出，不计入总词数。

There was a problem with the parking place for bikes in our school. me every day to see hundreds of

, a classmate and I visited the principal’s office and __________ our advice list to him, while school and promised to think over the problem.

A wave of pride surge through my heart when I see a new entrance is open

2013年北京高考情景作文

篇二：有关参加课外补习班英语作文

It seems that many students go to take after-school classes, but it is just a waste of time and money. I used to go to different kinds of these classes, too. But later I realized I couldn't do that any more. I began to spend more time reading, doing sports and taking some social activities. Meanwhile, I didn't fall behind others in study.

I prefer to have time to enjoy the nature. It's a wise way to know about the world. So I often put my spare time to good use by watching animals, plants, rocks .around my city. I still remember that day I went to the Forest Park this spring! And I found a few plants appearing in my biology books. It offered me an opportunity to deepen my understanding of my textbooks.

Learning by using is a real practice. I have benefited a lot from it. Now I am becoming more creative and confident than those who are always involved in taking after-school classes.

篇三：英语作文B班

1.Writing (25 minutes) Directions: This part is to test your ability to do practical writing. You are required to write a telephone message according to the instructions given in Chinese below. Remember to write your note on the Translation / Composition Sheet. 说明：假设你是河北化药学院人事处处 长王晓欣的秘书张小亮，按照留言条的 格式和要求，给王处长写一份电话留言。 1、 来电人：学院院长柴锡庆 2、 留言时间：2012.10.31上午8：25 3、 事由：柴锡庆院长刚才给王晓欣处 长打来电话，要求王晓欣处长明天上午9：00带上申请人的申请资料，到柴锡庆院长的办公室商讨机械工程系主任人选事宜。如果这个时间不合适，请王晓欣处长尽快给柴锡庆院长打电话。资料reference申请人applicant院长president 2. Writing (25 minutes) Directions: This part is to test your ability to do practical writing. You are required to write a Memo（备忘录）according to the instructions given in Chinese below. Remember to write your memo on the

说明：假设你是河北化药学院行政办公室主任Peter Zhang, 请以Peter Zhang的名义给办公室人员及各部门领导写一个备忘录。 1、发布时间：2012年11月21日 2、备忘录主题：方兴路被淹问题 3、备忘录内容：通知办公室全体人员及各部门领 导：近年来方兴路逢雨必淹，给全院师生出行带来 很大困难。学院拟组织志愿人员在每周四下午参与 方兴路修护。要求各部门领导给本部门师生开会作 好宣传组织工作并广泛征求良策。要求11月23日 前将各部门志愿者名单提交院办。 administrative office行政办公室flood泛滥，淹没 Translation / Composition Sheet.

A is different from B.

There are some differences between A and B.

Can you tell A from B?

Can you tell A and B apart? Can you tell the differences between A and B?

It is /was…that …

I didn’t get up until eight this morning.

It was not until eight that I got up this morning.

Not until eight did I get up this morning.

Last week I visited the factory in which my mom had worked for 20 years.

Last week I visited the factory which my father had built 20 years before.

consumer/consume/

consumption

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