英语作文第一句：In contrast the figure of staffs who the most dissatisf

英语作文第一句：In contrast,the figure of staffs who the most dissatisfy with their jobs account for 64％ among those between the age of 41 and 50.第二句：Several factors could weigh heavily for the different job satisfaction of staffs among different ages.第三句：Considering the phenomenon of an advanced degree to be indispensable for finding a satisfactory job ,I can think of no better examples than a classmate of mine,whose name is frequently suspended on the top of all kinds of honor roll.However,he cannot meet the requirements of the company which he has desired to join in,as a result,he has to choose to study reluctantly.悬赏分:0老师您好！我想问问我上面的三段话有哪些语法或者其他的错误？谢谢老师！辛苦了~~

英语作文第一句：In contrast the figure of staffs who the most dissatisfy with their jobs account for 64％ among those between the age of 41 and 50.第二句：Several factors could weigh heavily for the different job satisfaction of staffs among different ages.第三句：Considering the phenomenon of an advanced degree to be indispensable for finding a satisfactory job I can think of no better examples than a classmate of mine whose name is frequently suspended on the top of all kinds of honor roll.However he cannot meet the requirements of the company which he has desired to join in as a result he has to choose to study reluctantly.